Poetry/Triolet/Green Tranquility Copyright Protected, ID 07-1564-869-27 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France
Written, July 27, 2023 For the International Contest, Try A Triolet Sponsor, Kim Merryman, Judged 08/07/2023
First Place
I made a sweet uplifting place, a terrace garden so serene; it is a green lush private space. I made a sweet uplifting place, where tranquility I embrace; and God touches me in the green. I made a sweet uplifting place; a terrace garden so serene.
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