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Poetry/Triolet/Green Tranquility
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1564-869-27
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France 

Written, July 27, 2023
For the International Contest, Try A Triolet
Sponsor, Kim Merryman, Judged 08/07/2023

First Place

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Green Tranquility

 
I made a sweet uplifting place, a terrace garden so serene; it is a green lush private space. I made a sweet uplifting place, where tranquility I embrace; and God touches me in the green. I made a sweet uplifting place; a terrace garden so serene.
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Fowler Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 11:51 AM
So sweet and green - a beautiful garden Constance. Congratulations! :)
La France Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings !
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Wonderful win for a wonderful write. Congrats, Dear Heart.
La France Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings !
Slaughter Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Lovely, Constance. Congrats on its placement in the contest.
La France Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:14 PM
Jim, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings !
Agustin Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing this picturesque muse as well as the delightful photo. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.
La France Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:15 PM
Beata, thank you so much for the compliment, congrats and comment, blessings !
Mcintosh Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:07 AM
Amazing - both poem and place. Love this. God bless you and Congrats on the top win. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:15 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congrats, love and blessings !
Merryman Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Constance, excellent flow and rhyme. The scene is so lovely and peaceful that it made me wish I was there! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
La France Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congrats, blessings !
McBride  Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Love it, what a gift you have in writing,thanks for sharing with us all: )
La France Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and writing, appreciate !
Rolland Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 5:06 PM
beautiful, many people seek green, enjoyed yann
La France Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 7:02 AM
Yann, thank you so much for the compliment, green is such a calming color !
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