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Copyright Protected, ID 07-1564-869-27
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France 

Written, July 27, 2023
For the International Contest, Try A Triolet
Sponsor, Kim Merryman, Judged 08/07/2023

First Place

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I made a sweet uplifting place, a terrace garden so serene; it is a green lush private space. I made a sweet uplifting place, where tranquility I embrace; and God touches me in the green. I made a sweet uplifting place; a terrace garden so serene.

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Date: 8/10/2023 11:51:00 AM
So sweet and green - a beautiful garden Constance. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/11/2023 9:50:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings !
Date: 8/9/2023 1:03:00 PM
Wonderful win for a wonderful write. Congrats, Dear Heart.
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Date: 8/10/2023 6:19:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings !
Date: 8/8/2023 10:44:00 AM
Lovely, Constance. Congrats on its placement in the contest.
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Date: 8/8/2023 4:14:00 PM
Jim, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings !
Date: 8/8/2023 5:23:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing this picturesque muse as well as the delightful photo. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.
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Date: 8/8/2023 4:15:00 PM
Beata, thank you so much for the compliment, congrats and comment, blessings !
Date: 8/8/2023 3:07:00 AM
Amazing - both poem and place. Love this. God bless you and Congrats on the top win. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/8/2023 4:15:00 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congrats, love and blessings !
Date: 8/7/2023 6:43:00 PM
Constance, excellent flow and rhyme. The scene is so lovely and peaceful that it made me wish I was there! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/8/2023 4:16:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congrats, blessings !
Date: 7/28/2023 5:15:00 AM
Love it, what a gift you have in writing,thanks for sharing with us all: )
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Date: 7/28/2023 7:01:00 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and writing, appreciate !
Date: 7/27/2023 5:06:00 PM
beautiful, many people seek green, enjoyed yann
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Date: 7/28/2023 7:02:00 AM
Yann, thank you so much for the compliment, green is such a calming color !

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