Green Spanish Eyes - Part 3

Continued from Part 2
Ah Consuela! I’m watching as lightning at midnight in green Spanish eyes
kindles cracks within crystals like flashes from pistols
                 residing inside of the gloom
as it hovers above us betraying a dove as
                 she flees from the fountain of doom.

Ah Consuela! I’m watching, distilling despair in her green Spanish eyes,
and the bitterness stings like the snap of the strings
                 when a mystical  mandolin sighs
as the vampire shades suck the life from charades
                 neath the resinous residue skies.

Ah Consuela! I’m watching, she looks to the ledge with her green Spanish eyes,
for the terrace hangs high and she’s thinking to fly
                 and abandon fate’s merry-go-round.
At the edge I perceive her and rush to retrieve her –
                 she stumbles, falls far to the ground.

Ah Consuela! I’m watching the sparkles a’ spilling from green Spanish eyes.
As I peer from the railing, with evening exhaling,
                 I cry out a lover’s lament – 
there she lies midst the crowd with her spirit unbowed,
                 but her body’s all broken and bent.

Ah Consuela! I’m watching, she beckons me hither with green Spanish eyes,
and I’m slightly amazed being snared in her gaze
                 and a’ swirl in a hurricane way,
but the seconds are slipping, my courage is dripping,
                 the moment is bleeding away.

Ah Consuela! I touch her - she weeps tender tears from her green Spanish eyes;
as the breezes cease blowing, her essence leaves, flowing,
                 in streams neath the ambient light,
and the droplets drip swarming, so silent, yet warming,
                 like rain in a midsummer night.

Ah Consuela! I hold her, am hushed by the hints in her green Spanish eyes,
while her whispers are breathing the breaths of the seething
                 electrical skeletal winds,
and the words paint the poems that rivers a’ slowin’
                 reveal where the waterfall ends.

Ah Consuela! I’m fading in fires a’ flicker in green Spanish eyes,
as she plays back the past, she abandons and casts
                 away matters that no longer mend.
           .
                  .
And she reached out instead, as she lifted her head,
                 and we kissed as she parted, my friend.
           .
                  .
                          .
Ah Consuela! I’m tangled, entombed, trapped in tales of your green Spanish eyes,
in forsaken cantinas beyond the arenas
                 where night-time illusions once flowed,
for the ash neath my shoulder still throbs as it smoulders
                 some place near the end of the road.



End

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/9/2012 12:55:00 AM
I read all 3parts Terry.You never cease to anaze me but this is by far my favourite of yours..going to my favs. Lovely romantic breathtaking tale.
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Date: 11/26/2012 1:59:00 PM
This has a melancholy ending.:( Still, the imagery and rhyme sweep the reader along to the end. Nicely done, Terry!! Mikki
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:31:00 AM
Just fantastic word choices, imagery and meter! Love the style!
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Date: 11/25/2012 12:12:00 PM
Blue, Spanish eyes... Two drops are falling From your Spanish eyes... Please, please don't cry!... I am not Spanish But.. a bit Polish. Hair is reddish. My eyes are green. You know what a fox mean!
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Date: 11/24/2012 10:59:00 PM
Wonderful work. Enjoyed the whole poem. (Thanks for your comment on my haiku)
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Date: 11/24/2012 10:24:00 AM
absolutly amazing, this is...enjoy this fable, every much....
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Date: 11/23/2012 12:33:00 AM
Excellent! You never disappoint. What an awesome Three part poem.
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Date: 11/22/2012 3:14:00 AM
This one as you know is awesome i was exhausted following each twist, magnificent terry xx
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Date: 11/21/2012 5:26:00 AM
Sad that one meet their death by falling off a balcony..Creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2012 5:39:00 PM
(Bravo...Bravo...Bravissimo)...Once again I find myself saying this to your words.Excelent write! Keep it flowing~~~
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Date: 11/20/2012 2:26:00 PM
wow, I loved all three parts of this wonderful write, Terry. Excellent work
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Date: 11/20/2012 2:21:00 PM
nice
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Date: 11/20/2012 8:25:00 AM
Terry - This is a beautiful thing. That's all I can say today. I am in awe of your talent. I don't even want to interpret; it is a song of language. love, Kathy
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Date: 11/19/2012 6:09:00 PM
Terry--I read this trilogy and enjoyed thinking about you writing it. Do you believe the Spanish are so passionate? I had a feeling the ending would be tragic and was not disappointed. I think the lesson here is to act on your reasonable impulses before it's too late. Please take care of yourself so we don't have the romeo and Juliet thing! I also appreciate your comment. Thanks much.
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