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Green Satin and Burlap

She was wearing her green satin dress,
      soft and silky;
often, she would touch the fabric to caress,
she was sleek elegant with skin milky.
      On a park bench she was reading,
      a book of poetry old;
    stopping at times to do some bird feeding,
    the book was tattered with a cover once gold.
He threw down his weathered burlap knapsack . . . 
and took out a homemade paper bag snack . . . 

      She looked at him with great disgust,
      he was offensive;
his clothes were wrinkled and his boots had dust,
and she was getting ready to be defensive.
      But, his voice was so charming,
      and with blonde hair he was quite handsome;
    they talked and talked which she found alarming, 
    and from that moment he held her heart ransom.
In time, this satin and burlap couple said, "I do" . . . 
she wore satin and to his burlap bag he said, "adieu" . . .  

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March 14, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Green Satin and Burlap
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1003-900-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the contest, 
Best Rhyming Poem March 2018,
sponsor, Laura Loo

Second Place

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Written for the contest Burlap and Satin 
sponsor, Anthony Slausen

Rhyming Pattern- ababcdcdff
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 1:00 PM
A Hollywood ending. Congrats on your well deserved win, BW.
Gentry Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on your win! A great story and very well written.
Roper Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 5:23 PM
love this excellent write with great imagery dear friend.. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 10:14 AM
such beauty in your words sweet Broken Wings, you never cease to amaze me ;) thank you and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Godwin Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Absolutely charming, from beginning to end I was enthralled. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 4:45 PM
wow, you did such an amazing job with that difficult theme. I bet his is a win!!
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