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I started penning this poem with the title 
               'The Hotspot'

Then after the kisses, the touches, your warmth, our moment. .....
The title changed to 
               'I love'  or 'I love you'

We started off with a full moon 
"A bloody moon" you called it
An orange moon, I called it

And at the end of it all
The moon was still full
But this time, bright and wide
               Like our lives
Am always thankful to have you in my life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/6/2015 2:57:00 AM
An outstanding composition, laced with tearfully sweet emotions...
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njeri hunjeri
Date: 4/9/2015 4:37:00 AM
"tearfully sweet emotions..." I like that. Thank you so much Mumo. Good day.
Date: 4/5/2015 2:03:00 AM
What a lovely celebration of your relationship, njeri. #7. Happy Easter, Viv x
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njeri hunjeri
Date: 4/9/2015 4:36:00 AM
Thank you for your awesome comment Viv and for the 7. Good day.
Date: 4/5/2015 1:13:00 AM
wow.. loved it njeri... even though two people might have different perspectives on life, love surpasses those differences.. have a nice weekend friend... hugs, nad
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njeri hunjeri
Date: 4/9/2015 4:27:00 AM
Thank you for your awesome comment. Have a good day Nad.