Njeri Hunjeri Poet Free verse

Green Light

I started penning this poem with the title 
               'The Hotspot'

Then after the kisses, the touches, your warmth, our moment. .....
The title changed to 
               'I love'  or 'I love you'

We started off with a full moon 
"A bloody moon" you called it
An orange moon, I called it

And at the end of it all
The moon was still full
But this time, bright and wide
               Like our lives
Am always thankful to have you in my life

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Hannington Mumo April 6, 2015 at 2:57 AM An outstanding composition, laced with tearfully sweet emotions... Njeri Hunjeri April 9, 2015 at 4:37 AM "tearfully sweet emotions..." I like that. Thank you so much Mumo. Good day.

Viv Wigley April 5, 2015 at 2:03 AM What a lovely celebration of your relationship, njeri. #7. Happy Easter, Viv x Njeri Hunjeri April 9, 2015 at 4:36 AM Thank you for your awesome comment Viv and for the 7. Good day.

Poesy Relish April 5, 2015 at 1:13 AM wow.. loved it njeri... even though two people might have different perspectives on life, love surpasses those differences.. have a nice weekend friend... hugs, nad Njeri Hunjeri April 9, 2015 at 4:27 AM Thank you for your awesome comment. Have a good day Nad.