Green Light--New

Mom’s old Chrysler is the scourge of my life
driving it, this sedan makes me complain 
forty meters on a ride, the wheels pop--
by that time, I miss the green light... again!

So I'm squatting like a fool on a byway
with prayers, the tow truck gets here real fast--
while counting a  hundred 'go' lights blink on ; 
my lacy dress spoils, my frail wits aghast!

To make matters worse, tonight's the great prom...
While above the green bulb, a poster reads,
" Is your auto worn-out? Here's an offer!
Get the new Chrysler where each ride succeeds!



Carolyn Devonshire's Contest
Green Humor Rhymes, Old Or New For Prizes
1/16/2019 ~ Revised

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/24/2019 7:48:00 PM
oh what a time to be reminded not to break down lol Many congrats on your win Nette :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/24/2019 7:30:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "Green" Humor Contest, Nette :) - greeting from // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2019 7:13:00 AM
Hi Nette, Just calling by with congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 3/23/2019 8:22:00 PM
It must be hard sitting in a broken down old Chrysler and seeing a sign that tells you the new ones will never let you down, Nette. Cute poem. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries, so you should be proud of your achievement. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/18/2019 3:42:00 PM
I have not driven a car in years. Used to have a red Ford Tempo - the furthest I ever drove was to New England for a crafts fair. Did not have a prom at my high school. Jewish holiday coming up - Purim - do you know about that? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/18/2019 2:26:00 PM
Very humorous,Nette, this would be my luck..good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/17/2019 9:24:00 PM
You've added another memoir to your beautiful life, some make you smile, some not, today you resurrect it all with poetry, lovely write Nette. Hope all is well, sending hugs xo
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Date: 3/17/2019 3:11:00 PM
It's a memento from your Mom..hard to part with..it's testing you..best for a win, Nette.
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Date: 3/17/2019 2:46:00 PM
- An inconvenient time to collapse ... well done for the contest, Nette :) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2019 1:38:00 PM
Oh I so love this poem - and on prom night of all nights! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/17/2019 9:01:00 AM
Great one Nette! Well done :)
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