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Green Kites

Ideas are green kites that lift me high birth most beautiful blue dreams To my dandelion delight I fulfill in teal time For I can do amber anything Oh! You say I’ve run away Imagination is a red train But to stay in hazel head all day Isn’t always a bad thing Purple prophecy, proposal cerebral kind For if you dare you will not fail To never give up is divine. Heart desire is burgundy boat’s sail When I write black soul takes flight And I can go anywhere I can be wrong I can be right The fun is in getting there. submitted 10/1/23 for contest Gnarled Graceful Green Words Sponsor Constance La France

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Sam Scott

Date: 9/29/2023 10:27:00 PM

Such a lovely poem! I like "Heart desire is burgundy boat’s sail" and I like the style of this especially the peppered alliteration, very nice Karen :))

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 10:47:00 PM

Thanks Sam!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2023 6:07:00 PM

Your ideas are absolutely exquisite. Allow your imagination to soar freely. Your poetry surpasses all expectations. The imagery you create is flawless, and your words have the power to transport us into a magnificent poem.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 6:11:00 PM

Where do you find the time to read poems when you create such powerful lengthy ones yourself? Thanks so much for taking time to read my little poems.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 8:24:00 AM

Come fly a kite, a song from Mary Poppins. Such lovely ideas. Fly, let your imagination flow. Your poetry excels.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 8:36:00 AM

As a master yourself I am humbled by your words. Thanks Victor.

Silent One

Date: 9/29/2023 1:35:00 AM

I hope you kite flies higher an higher.. Have you thought about getting membership so you can run contests? You write very well and read a lot of poems, would be interesting to see you do a contest.. Good luck in this one.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2023 2:01:00 AM

I entered the contest because of you dear friend.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 1:40:00 AM

This one was not for contest. lol It is not deep enough. I have thought about it and will likely. Hugs