Notes About The Poem

Green In the Sky

watercolored charm
formed by the art of magic
a painted rainbow

drenching eluded
yet a hued dream seemed so near
radiant pastels

wide bands of color
in never before seen shades
most notably green

a chance encounter
a lucky rare day of life
with the sweet close up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:14 PM
Gorgeous sight and fine triple Haiku, my friend. Have a joyful week! Bill
Buehler Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:47 PM
I appreciate your kind thoughts very much, Bill. Hope your week is wonderful, too. :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 1:27 PM
nothing so enchanting as a rainbow. Great job, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Andrea. The poem describes an actual experience. I was in and out of several stores on a stormy day, and I didn't get wet. Once inside a store, the rain would come. By the time I'd leave the store, the rain always had stopped. Then when I was almost home, out came the sun, and that magnificent rainbow, which had me spellbound. What a lovely day I had! :D
Rolland Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 7:53 AM
a magical poem, .i love rainbows, thanks Evelyn for the enjoyable reading
Buehler Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 11:56 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Yann. Thank you so much.
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