Green In the Sky

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watercolored charm formed by the art of magic a painted rainbow drenching eluded yet a hued dream seemed so near radiant pastels wide bands of color in never before seen shades most notably green a chance encounter a lucky rare day of life with the sweet close up

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Bill Baker

Date: 4/17/2023 5:14:00 PM

Gorgeous sight and fine triple Haiku, my friend. Have a joyful week! Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/17/2023 5:47:00 PM

I appreciate your kind thoughts very much, Bill. Hope your week is wonderful, too. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2023 1:27:00 PM

nothing so enchanting as a rainbow. Great job, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/12/2023 5:34:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. The poem describes an actual experience. I was in and out of several stores on a stormy day, and I didn't get wet. Once inside a store, the rain would come. By the time I'd leave the store, the rain always had stopped. Then when I was almost home, out came the sun, and that magnificent rainbow, which had me spellbound. What a lovely day I had! :D

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/11/2023 7:53:00 AM

a magical poem, .i love rainbows, thanks Evelyn for the enjoyable reading

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/12/2023 11:56:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Yann. Thank you so much.