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Green Hills

I shall not waiver nor will I digress
from gazing at these lambent hills of green
where mounds of grass like cobblestones progress
from creek beds where the ash and alder preen,

their leaves like coins that shimmer in the sun,
up to the graceful summits round and lush,
that as the waning mists become undone
and dissipate within the morning hush

are bathed in iridescent emerald.
My eyes are now redeemed of paining dark,
though stars' asunder twinkling would herald
the incandescent trilling of the lark.

Indeed with eyes enraptured I confess
I shall not waiver nor will I digress.

10/22/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 12:38 PM
Glamour of Green Hills.Enjoy. Nice.
Leiser Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Gorgeous poetry! Love this! :)
Cozart Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Thank you so much, Laura.
Messina Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Very Nice Dale. Great example! Charlie
Cozart Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Thanks very much, Charlie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 1:59 PM
A great example for your contest Dale. Orphan is a great choice for your invented sonnet. It will be pretty difficult to top this beauty. I am a fan, as you know I was impressed enough to fave this first time I read it. Not sure if I can attempt this, but I am inspired. : )
Cozart Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Thanks very much, Connie. I'd be honored if you gave it a whirl.
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Dropping back to read this gem Dale, I have a mental block when it comes to writing sonnets but will see if the muse will behave, thanks for the contest prompt it is quite a challenge for me:-) hugs Jan xx
Ravidas Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 3:05 PM
I confess too. I enjoyed every stanza. With eyes enraptured. This is so beautiful that enjoyment is everything what I can say.
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 4:47 PM
As I said earlier, this is a wonderful sonnet and I was happy to see you high up on the winners' list, Dale. Hugs, Carolyn
Callus Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:24 PM
You have definitely managed to appeal to my senses with this beautiful poem, Dale! Both poem and accompanying visual are captivating. !~~! Congratulations on your podium finish. // paul
Cozart Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thank you, Paul.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Wow Dale, this poem ensconsed me in rapture! You are so talented at describing her beauty! "where the ash and alder preen,their leaves like coins that shimmer in the sun,". Astounding beauty and I must Fave this! Congratulations on your deserving top win! Happy holidays my friend! xxoo : )
Cozart Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Thank you so very much, Connie, for your kind words and wishes. I always appreciate them.
Hamilton Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Dale...this is stunning writing! Very worthy winner in a VERY tough contest to judge. Congrats on a top win!
Cozart Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thanks so much, John.
Devonshire Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Dale, you chose a stunning image to place above your sonnet. Your words that describe the grass like cobblestone and graceful summits, bathed in the iridescent emerald are a perfect match for the captivating picture. It looks like a scene from the UK in a calendar I just received. Excellent writing; you surely know how to compose a sonnet! Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn
Cozart Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Thanks so much, Carolyn.
Daniel Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 7:58 AM
This is serenely beautiful, Dale:)
Cozart Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Thanks so much, Jo.
Sergi Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 5:34 PM
A beautiful sonnet and your hills are alive with the sound of music!
Cozart Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thanks for reading, Ralph!
Gauthier Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Lovely poem. Congrats on your top win, Dale.
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 4:30 PM
absolutely beautiful sonnet with such stunning images Dale:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thank you very much, Jan.
Gentile Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 1:29 PM
A beautiful Sonnet Dale, as rich and lush as its subject!!!
Cozart Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Thanks, Mike!
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October 22, 2018 at 12:32 PM
- This was really beautiful; "their leaves like coins that shimmer in the sun," a beautiful description Dale :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise.
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