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Green Grass of Home

the green grass of home
other pastures desirable
commandments broken

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2010 11:27:00 PM

A very interesting haiku, Mac! And thanks again for the win. Luv ya, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2010 6:30:00 PM

U are so kind Mac and I appreciate so very much u enjoying my creatvie writes as I have very much enjoyed your Haiku .. lots of message between the lines too ... enjoyed.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/4/2010 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Mac for recognising my poem in your contest. It was a pleasure to participate. BG2fb

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 6/4/2010 1:36:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, dear Mac. Can you tell me the name of the photographer of the rose or where you found it on the net? Please. All the best, Iolanda

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/3/2010 4:19:00 AM

You say such alot with this piece Mac.. Ps : thank you for your comment on my Darkness piece ~ rgds Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 8:11:00 PM

Nice one Bob ..gues it was for Rick's contest.. mine did not make the cut either... but very nice one from u .. I always enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/2/2010 5:52:00 PM

One of the finest haiku I have ever read, Mac. This goes to my favorite poem

Joe Flach

Date: 6/2/2010 5:40:00 PM

It's like the grass is always greener thing rolled up into the don't covet thy neighbor's wife thing. Interesting - also kind of a Haiku rolled up in a Senryu. I like it Mac. Nice job. Joe

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2010 4:36:00 PM

Oh- oh..the grass is greener thing again. lol Well done Mac. BG