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Green Grass Trials and tribulations Life and its frustrations The train awaits me at the station Do I get on, or let it pass me by? The grass isn’t always greener Looking at those who’ve been there What’s for them isn’t for me Face life head on Be who I want to be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/9/2016 5:26:00 AM
Decision making isn't always easy...I know that from experience! We would hate to be stuck in a rut, we need change, but we need reassuring that it's going to be for the better! Good to see your muse in fine form, Laura! ~ Best regards // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/10/2016 7:20:00 AM
You're right Paul, they're not easy. If you get on the train you need to be sure its the right one! Thanks again for stopping by, warm regards, Laura.
Date: 8/9/2016 2:54:00 AM
Profound and didactic. Good writing dear, Laura!
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/9/2016 3:22:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind comments Demetrios :)
Date: 8/8/2016 5:00:00 AM
Beautifully meaningful poem ... the way station was used to rhyme with frustration is unique ... liked the poem very much ...
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/8/2016 2:05:00 PM
Many thanks Probir for your kind comments, appreciate your time in stopping by to read my poem.
Date: 8/8/2016 4:42:00 AM
Very good, Laura. Like the thought. Barry
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