Laura Hay Poet Free verse

Green Grass

Green Grass

Trials and tribulations
Life and its frustrations
The train awaits me at the station
Do I get on, or let it pass me by?

The grass isn’t always greener
Looking at those who’ve been there
What’s for them isn’t for me
Face life head on
Be who I want to be

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Paul Callus August 9, 2016 at 5:26 AM Decision making isn't always easy...I know that from experience! We would hate to be stuck in a rut, we need change, but we need reassuring that it's going to be for the better! Good to see your muse in fine form, Laura! ~ Best regards // paul Laura Hay August 10, 2016 at 7:20 AM You're right Paul, they're not easy. If you get on the train you need to be sure its the right one! Thanks again for stopping by, warm regards, Laura.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 9, 2016 at 2:54 AM Profound and didactic. Good writing dear, Laura! Laura Hay August 9, 2016 at 3:22 AM Many thanks for your kind comments Demetrios :)

Probir Gupta August 8, 2016 at 5:00 AM Beautifully meaningful poem ... the way station was used to rhyme with frustration is unique ... liked the poem very much ... Laura Hay August 8, 2016 at 2:05 PM Many thanks Probir for your kind comments, appreciate your time in stopping by to read my poem.

Barry Stebbings August 8, 2016 at 4:42 AM Very good, Laura. Like the thought. Barry