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Green Grass

Green Grass Green-- GLIMMER of dew on early dawn grass has a new beginning of GOLD sun-rays Green-- RAIN from a wisp of TEAL sky pounds on pane glass, Green-- BREEZE of cool crisp WHITE breath twisting and lacing, through bouts Green-- SAVORING the herbs evokes a sour LEMON YELLOW taste Green -– EMBRACES of nature, spring growth of nostalgic PURPLE Glimmer, Gold, Rain, Teal, Breeze, White, Savoring, Lemon Yellow, Embraces, Purple Dormant grass is first kissed by the glimmer of gold hued sunrise rays The sound of panging rain beats in my ears, turns double rainbows into teal bluegrass Breeze tightly weaves and curls through one another’s tendrils leaving a wisp of pure clean white scent Savoring sweetly tangy flavor of lemon yellow tender blades of grass among the foliage Autumn embraces nature’s colors of sunshine laced in purple flowers in summer Heavenly 10/31/2015 contest: Green sponsored by; Silent One
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A   Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your Greenish win. Love LINDA
George   Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 5:48 AM
Heavenly indeed, Eve. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Mcclain Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Hi Eve, Wonderful imagery, congrats on your placement in the contest! Very well written piece!
Raven Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Hi Eve, Loved the poem. Congratulations on your win in this contest.
Haight Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in the 'Green' contest! Great poem. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Eve, "Dormant grass is first kissed by the glimmer of gold hued sunrise rays", wow is that beautiful! Congrats on your placement! -luloo :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Heavenly indeed! Congratulations Eve.
Tor Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Eve excellent win!
Negron Flores Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Excellent poem. Congratulations in your win.
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 2:37 PM
The grass was laden with dew this morn and soon it will be frost..Congrats on this green win..Sara
A  Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Hi Eve,, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Reams Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Congrats on your win Eve! Wonderful colors and the senses used to describe the grass. Wonderful. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
Hay Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Wonderfully done Eve. I too found this a challenging write, you have certainly done a great job, good luck, Laura.
Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Well done and congrats Eve, well deserved! :)
Roper Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your compliment. It was a very challenging right. Hugs Eve
Nunez Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 4:04 AM
This looks complicated, Eve. But the finished product is worth it. Lovely. 7. Soupmail. hugs!
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 8:00 AM
It was complicated, Kim, I struggled with it, but I had to give it a try just because.. now I need to do Silent Ones. Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Creative ideas for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your awesome support. Hugs
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