Green Grass

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Poetry/Jueju/Wueju/Green Grass
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1548-732-20
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written May 20, 2023

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Green grass / glass glazed stream Blooms mauve / pink blue dream White horse / runs to me Spring hues / gold sun gleam

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Suzette Richards

Date: 6/6/2023 5:01:00 AM

I loved this poem, but for the word "to". Structure words and auxiliary words were excluded from the contest. No one is more disappointed than I that such a simple thing had tripped you up, Constance. Kind regards, Suzette

Suzette Richards
Date: 6/7/2023 6:19:00 AM

That is all that counts at the end of the day: enjoying the process. I did enjoy the challenge of writing the wujue in collaboration with you (per my last soup-mail). :)

Constance La France
Date: 6/7/2023 4:58:00 AM

Suzette, thank you for the contest and inspiration, darn that "to" cost me, but I still enjoyed the writing the poem !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2023 8:18:00 AM

Absolutely love your approach with this difficult form, Constance. Not too many of them make sense to me but yours is so clear

Constance La France
Date: 5/22/2023 8:42:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, it was very difficult to have it make sense !