Greedy Air

Metals in cloth 
Opening holes of fashion 
Allow cold breezed air through
It enters my shirt, mixing through my skin 
It starves to enter
Enter my body 
Cause the compassion 
For white cells to fight back 
Stingily and inconsiderately it penetrates 
Through my flesh, into my cells
Inside my body it breathers
It triggers me to close my jacket
Blind the holes
The cold breeze of air seeks warmth
Finds it in my cozy blood
Refuses to turn back 
To return
I desperately hug myself tightly 
Experiencing the most twigging stomach ache 
I lay down in discomfort and chill 
Covering my body with blankets
And wrapping myself with clothes
The cold aired creature confiscated me in illness
As I trusted my body in destroying the germ 
I wait in aching and sore
As hours pass I rush to the toilet
To get out with the feeling of victory
And my gratefulness to my body
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 19, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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September 18, 2010 at 1:33 PM
nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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