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"greed Creed"

nature liberty freedom of choice the birds lose dinosaur blood slick Placed # 3

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 8:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your third place win, john!! LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest John. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2010 2:15:00 PM

enjoyed as well, Thank you so much for your so out there enjoyable comments, John have yourself a nice one,..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2010 5:43:00 AM

Clever poetry John, i just love the line dinosaur blood slick, terrific >> congrats on your win >> James

Andrew Crisci

Date: 5/16/2010 12:31:00 AM

Congratulations on you win, John! Great statement on a Man-made disaster. This is a magnificent write! I wish you many more in the near future. Have a wonderful day and smile. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/15/2010 11:41:00 PM

John your poems are always good. I put some more info on a blog. "What judges don't like in a Haiku and Punctuation". Read it and give me some feed back. You mentioned the Meditation poem. No I didn't put it into a contest yet, but I will. I think it is one of my better poems, but did it in like about 30 seconds. It came to me and I had pen in hand and just jotted it down. Carol Brown was recouping and I dedicated it to her. Let me hear from you, I appreciate your comments. rgds cgh

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/15/2010 7:45:00 PM

good spin on the photo, different!! I like it!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2010 4:18:00 PM

Must have missed this while traveling, John. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Indeed, the birds lose along with all sea life. Love that last line!! Great work. Love, Carolyn

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/15/2010 12:31:00 PM

john pls go back to the poem "meditation" I put two comments there to answer your question. Did not finish. Am short for time but want to continue on a blog where we can talk together. I'll get bact soon. regards cgh

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/14/2010 5:47:00 PM

You did a good job of engaging the reader's mind with this work. You had me thinking! RAY

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 1:01:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this wonderful write.. another win well deserved for u to enjoy my friend..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/14/2010 12:06:00 AM

John, congratulations on 3rd place in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul

Joe Flach

Date: 5/13/2010 9:32:00 PM

John, very creative. I think that is the genius in these kind of contests - finding a place to take it where nobody else would go - "dinosaur blood" is a very creative, intelligent and witty description for the oil. Bravo. Joe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2010 8:27:00 PM

Powerful and inventive write Moses and good luck in the contest with this perfect depiction of the photo .. awesome title my friend.. sad tragedy... predictions coming true frequently now.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/13/2010 3:37:00 PM

Greed and more greed! .they refuse to believe that when you destroy nature, you do the same to man...everything God made is one..everything is related..common sense would tell them that man and nature, all share the air and environment..one can't survive without the other!!! But greed rules in the corporate world...Good luck in the contest, John.. Peace, Audrey

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/13/2010 3:19:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, John...your friend, Jimmy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2010 2:09:00 PM

Interesting point of view in this one...I haven't been closely following it...I will have to turn on the news today and see if I can find out what new is happening...Is this in Revelations...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara