Greed

Greed is like an uncontrolled steed It might gallop in reckless speed Any time it can kick you down to bleed Sometimes even causing a stampede June. 25.2022 Greed Poetry Contest Sponsor: Margarita Lillico

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2022 7:03:00 PM

I can visualize greed just as you've portrayed it, Valsa. An expert poem about an unwelcome rampage. Thanks, gw

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/25/2022 5:12:00 AM

Greed is all of those things you so ably describe. Win BIG my friend.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/25/2022 4:06:00 AM

Valsa, you wrote a beautiful rhyming poem. This topic is brimming with creativity. You specify greed flawlessly. We have far too much of it that provokes food insecurity and military interventions.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/25/2022 1:15:00 AM

You define greed well. We have so much of it, resulting in hunger and wars.