Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Greatest of Loves

With each morning hug, nighttime 
releases gentle sighs
Floating upon warm breezes 
are their whispered replies
It’s a classical type of 
love that what we share
Elizabeth Browning couldn't 
count the ways we care
A romantic beautiful story 
telling how we take the lead
Blending so well together 
we’re a rare dying breed
See Romeo and Juliet’s love 
met an untimely death
Unable to be revived not 
even with love’s breath
Traveling through time and space, 
our love will endure
Inside each of those seconds 
our motives being pure
Never knowing absolute happiness 
until I found you 
We will shape futures pages 
with this undying love so true

7/6/2020

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John Hamilton July 9, 2020 at 6:04 PM This is a wonderful write Brenda, how it should feel, congrats on a top win! Brenda Chiri July 10, 2020 at 9:52 AM Thank you John! I’m am waiting to experience that type of love! I know it’s out there and I plan on having it lol!;)

William Kelii Kekaula July 8, 2020 at 7:03 PM Intimately well-penned, Brenda, breathless expressions that weaved a beautiful tapestry of soulful passion, my compliments for your fine TOP win at 1st Place -- Aloha~@William Brenda Chiri July 10, 2020 at 9:50 AM William thank you so very much! Your words are greatly appreciated you are too kind!;)

JC Brul July 8, 2020 at 2:01 PM Congratulations dear Brenda. This is the type of a passionate poem that I thirst. The way you say....Elizabeth Barret couldn't count the ways...mesmerizing dear Brenda! A fave! Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 2:12 PM Thank you I am so happy do many like it! I enjoyed writing! It I was to be a collab with a friend of mine on a another site! We will see if he follows through with his part!;)

Sam Kauffman July 8, 2020 at 11:57 AM References to the classics in a classic poem, my friend. So many wonderful phrases bright with imagery - "inside each of those seconds," "shape future pages," "nighttime releases gentle sighs." So fun to share the podium with you. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings and hugs! Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 2:09 PM Sam thank you! As I told John I babes used reference to literature before but it just seemed to fit this time! I’m so happy you enjoyed it!;)

John Watt July 8, 2020 at 10:47 AM Brenda, I enjoyed reading your winsome tale of love today, with such a positive vibe. I liked your literary references to Browning and Shakespeare adding historical depth to your words. Simply beautiful. Congratulations on your top win ~ John Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 2:07 PM Thank you so much John! And yes this was the first time I had used any kind of reference to literature history! But it just seemed to fit into the poem!;)

Paula Goldsmith July 8, 2020 at 10:08 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Did you say, your Anniversary was on July 4?????? If yes, hope you had a great day. Enjoy your win and day.......... Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 10:38 AM Thank you so much! But no I am single not married so no anniversary ! Thx anyway:)

Gary Radice July 8, 2020 at 8:15 AM Congratulations on your top win Brenda Cheers :) Gary Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 8:18 AM Thank so much!;)

Ann Gilmour July 8, 2020 at 7:43 AM The sweetest love story dear Brenda, many congrats on your top win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 8:02 AM And thank you so very much!;)

Vijay Pandit July 8, 2020 at 7:08 AM BIG congrats on your TOP win Brenda. Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 8:01 AM Haha! Thank you Vijay!;)

Patri Venkata Ramana July 8, 2020 at 6:53 AM Congrats on your top win! Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 8:00 AM Thank you so much!;)

Aditi Mishra July 8, 2020 at 6:47 AM A beautiful and soothing tale of love Brenda. Congratulations on your win! :) Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 10:32 AM Thank you so much!;)

Rick Still July 8, 2020 at 2:02 AM Brenda, this is beautiful and I really connect with it Brenda Chiri July 8, 2020 at 7:59 AM Ahh I am so glad you can! And I appreciate your lovely comment!;)

Mark Koplin July 6, 2020 at 3:15 PM Very beautiful! Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 4:40 PM Thank you so much Mark!;)

Vijay Pandit July 6, 2020 at 11:41 AM So much passion in this ode to undying true love..you write love verses beautifully, Brenda. Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 11:49 AM Ahh thank you Vijay! I like to think I’ve had plenty of time to think on how it should truly be! Set ones sight high and never settle!;)

Mystic Rose Rose July 6, 2020 at 11:34 AM You speak of a strong love, and an even stronger spirit. You have written a weighted poem of love and endurance, may you continue to write like this for a very long time, Thank you Brenda for sharing, have a blessed day, hugs xo Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 11:48 AM Pixie thank you so very much! Your words of encouragement are so welcomed!;)