Greatest News Ever

Just landed in my ears
just dazzled my mind 
my local political head 
I was talking to him today
Lord you send such a beautiful messages to me
the past couple of days 
I suggested a gift from God
that his great light shone over me
In reverence to Our Most Holy Spirit
telling him my great news 
Now he has said 
that he will do everything in his power
To get me published wow stunned 
I was hearing hearing his pride in me
Its like coming out of a cave 
alone as a hermit in the mountains
Now I have found peace
In love everything shines so bright
Thank you Lord and master 
for showing me and helping me see 
to draw in your light
I even mentioned getting my lonely prayer
for Christmas donated to the church of granite 
In the shape of a crucifix 
whom my grandfather help build
A cross pointing to Heaven
Golden guilded to the house off God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:38 AM
words and works that is aimed to glorify Him, worship Him and for His kingdom I believe He will bless this.. :) NOthing is impossible to Him so long as we cling on Him.. as we begin anything if we earnestly thought of Him and not plainly because it's for us. i believe He will by all means make it true.. :)
Mcdaid Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 8:58 AM
ah olive that is sweet and beautiful your comment bless you really touched me thank you kindly dear friend
Maverick Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 8:29 PM
Hello Liam thank you for letting me know of the featured piece, and well done on being published, 'specially with the right motive and aim..'
Mcdaid Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 8:51 PM
joe thank you for your kind and very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Yvonne Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 9:57 PM
God loves you and you are blessed. It is your warm heart.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 11:35 AM
maurice thank you deeply dear friend heartfelt beautiful comment bless you pal
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Very nice verses Liam! I really enjoyed your poem! God must be smiling a lot at you, with this one my friend. ;) thank you for your visit. Hugs! Love peace and lights, Xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 7:40 PM
he sure was dorian thank you for the wonderful comment bless you
Sibanda Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations! Breakthroughs are wonderful moments to treasure and thank God for.Wishing you all the best.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 10:24 AM
thank you so kindly ndaba heartwarming beautiful comment i always thank him being honest god bless
Lamoureux Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 8:22 AM
God is indeed good, I am so happy for you. I realized my dream this past January after two years of writing. My first run sold out and in May my second printing came out. My desire is to honour God through my writing. The gift he has given me, now given back to his glory.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 8:50 AM
exactly how i see it he draws from the golden treasures deeply he holds the power of every pens beauty tiny steps richard i am commisioned to write for glebe house a gallery in my county which has a picasso and a renoir so thats my next step hope i can get someone locally to write in old celtic writing i want it to look good in a gallery fair play to you richard putting my hand out for a shake pal smiling
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 10:09 PM
So you are getting published! That is wonderful. Congratulations for this blessing that you have been praying for!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:10 AM
its the beginning steps each rung in climbing i pray it all works great its in his hands how i write i just write from the soul thank you andrea dear friend for the heartwarming beautiful comment
Devonshire Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Dear Liam, How happy you are! I'm so glad someone is going to help you get more readers for your work. I admire your faith and it would be wonderful to donate a prayer poem for the crucifix your grandfather helped build. Bravo! A favorite for sure and many congratulations on your well-deserved success! Love, Carolyn
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 7:04 PM
carolyn truly heartwarming beautiful comment what a good idea its a standing monument thank you so kindly bless you
Chircop Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 5:46 PM
God will grant us anything that is good for us and in the moment that's best,all We need is faith,and you have plenty.I feel so happy for you..Hooray!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 7:00 PM
thank you charmaine dear friend such a heartwarming beautiful comment your so kind bless you
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Ahh!! To hear a positive note from God..Way to go with this faith based work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 2:11 PM
thank you as always dear friend truly wonderful comment sara
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:49 AM
- Yes, it was the greatest news ever, Liam - Lovely written! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:04 PM
you have a great weekend also anne lise bless you wonderful comment
Lindley Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 9:59 AM
You deserve it my friend. Your verses have inspired me numerous times to write and to think about life.. Inspiring others is the gift poet's send and should strive for IMHO. You do that with your writes very well. Congrats on your great news!!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 10:36 AM
ah that is so sweet robert yeah i feel really dazzled in it all being truthful just wondering the next steps from now i am climbing on the ladders so to speak robert lol wonder where it will go to just amazes me wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Trifiatis Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 7:08 AM
Nothing shines brighter than the light of our Lord, we just have to open the window of our soul for to see! Your good news delight me my friend. Wonderful poem of faith, dear Liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:07 AM
so true pal brings such warm grace really humbling thank you kindly demetrios wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Thajudeen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 5:55 AM
In love everything shines so bright...pretty good the verses.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:34 AM
love is guardian of the soul wonderful comment muhamma thank you deeply dear friend
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