Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Greatest Moment Ever

Just love how the pieces they come together you and I
a feeling so uplifting like to perfect souls match
one could not have wished for more 
so at peace in your company love having you around
Inspiring this heart to do greater things
life ahead shines inspirational in my writing with you
Dancing in dreamlike clouds of the purest white
oh fair maiden awakening 
beside a Queen to look upon
love struck in awe 
Mist moist most lovingly falls
from these eyes as you lay sleeping
Thinking back 
I pulled hair away from your face
just lay there staring at you darling
Wow dazzling beautiful enters my space
just leaned over so soft gently a peck light brushing
Looking to the Heavens thanking God for such a gift 
Kissed you as you slept whispering softly into your dreams
I love you babe
Tears fell that night in so much warm happiness
one of the happiest nights I ever had 
When these eyes just kissed you darling
a thousand times in one flash 
Warms the very air that you breathe 
whom looks amazing 
jewel perfect

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Sandip Goswami October 8, 2014 at 3:07 PM Fundamental atmosphere of every poet in the universe. Honestly you described it. I love her. Because she is not only your lover but also me. It's your great success...Now the poem is universal....Best wishes from India... Liam Mcdaid October 8, 2014 at 4:17 PM sandip thank you so kindly from ireland sending you an irish blessing wonderful comment

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen October 7, 2014 at 7:51 PM The last line to last long. Liam Mcdaid October 7, 2014 at 8:32 PM smiling thank you muhamma bless you for the lovely comment greatly appreciated

Gary Bateman October 7, 2014 at 5:27 PM Liam . . . You passion, emotion, and romantic feeling all come together in this very beautiful piece at achieve a most pleasing and truly magnificent result. Enjoyed this one immensely!! All the best my very good friend . . . Gary Liam Mcdaid October 7, 2014 at 5:41 PM garry you brought a smile to my face thank you from the heart pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Vera Duggan October 5, 2014 at 8:47 PM Oh Liam how lovely that poem is, you sound so happy, hope this love lasts as long as ours, good luck my friend she sounds like a lovely lady, take care the two of you.............Vera........... Liam Mcdaid October 5, 2014 at 10:12 PM i hope so to vera i pray for the strength each night thank you kindly for the touching beautiful comment bless you

Charmaine Chircop October 5, 2014 at 3:18 PM I feel you happy..In each verse I can feel you smile,almost hugging the sky.Just beautiful Liam. Liam Mcdaid October 5, 2014 at 6:52 PM i am happy tears in my eyes remembering that treasure moment yeah i smiled charmaine thank you dear friend for the kind beautiful comment pal ever so deeply appreciated bless you

Nette Onclaud October 5, 2014 at 12:55 PM breathless, liam.. what an affectionate, warm piece... huggs Liam Mcdaid October 5, 2014 at 1:22 PM nette wonderful comment thank you so much heartfelt beautiful bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2014 at 12:19 PM - What can I say: Woooow ..... "dazzling beautiful" ..... YES, it is!!!!! - Love it Liam !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid October 5, 2014 at 12:31 PM thank you anne lise for the dazzling beautiful comment bless you

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2014 at 12:14 PM for me, this is the kind of thing that I also feel would be my greatest moment. I have done that theme numerous times about one special night! Love it. Liam Mcdaid October 5, 2014 at 12:28 PM andrea there is always that one moment smiling wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated