Greatest Inspiration

You are the greatest inspiration of mine,
sweeter than a glass of wine,
Brighter than a child’s eye,
truer than my truest lie.
I always wait for your call to meet,
to hold you in my arms and sleep.
You make my night the biggest storm,
then leave me all broken and torn.
When I rise and make it through
my heart forgets what is done by you-
Sweeter than a glass of wine,
you are the greatest inspiration of mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 26, 2016 at 10:35 AM
You have a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing. Love Linda
A  Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Victoria:) Congratulations on your placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT
Georgieva Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, it is always exciting to participate in a contest :) Hugs
Heemstra Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 6:44 AM
I just love that line, "Truer than my truest lie." Your poem is am inspiration. Thank you.
Georgieva Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Bateman Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Victoria, A most excellent first write here and posting to PoetrySoup!! Like Anne-Lise Andresen said below, I want to welcome you also to the PoetrySoup Family. You'll have the chance to interact with many poets through your poems and your thoughts. I am always available if you have any questions. Liam McDaid and I work together on some co-writes each week and the both of us have been writing for quite awhile. (I joined PoetrySoup back on August 9th.) My Best Wishes to you on your writing!! Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 9:06 AM
almost feels like a toast to beauty very beautifully painted piece victoria
Georgieva Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 9:32 AM
Thank you for your opinion! Best wishes
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 6:43 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Victoria - I choose your first lovely very well written poem - I like it a lot !! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Georgieva Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 6:55 AM
Thank you very much, so kind of you. Best wishes to you
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