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I really do trust you honey all one asks of you in return love please don't hurt me as you're, gem precious Sparking dazzles the sun setting rose Gold awakening a treasure feeling inside dreams become reality, you babe the nightshades silk satin warm kissing a star one magic wish Embracing deeply thought, of your touch in fingers One light weaving, gently drawing, sweet pure and raw Emotions sweetheart soft, warmly, loving you true Tenderly alone one gift love you're an angel ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ About this poem: wrote in a 9/12 syllable count

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Date: 12/1/2014 10:07:00 PM
A poetic treasure. Nothing more needs to be said (but bless those who have said it).
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Date: 11/25/2014 10:28:00 AM
:) How sweet it must be to be in love with an angel, Liam. I hope that this angel is good to you. You deserve it. Hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 12:27:00 PM
the angel is the light eileen who takes away the darkness love at the end of the tunnel dear friend wonderful comment got me thinking, thank you so very kindly deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 9:49:00 AM
My very dear friend Liam, this is so beautiful! And I really enjoyed it so much. Yes the grestest gift of all..Love .Just so filled of love tenderness romance like true love should be.A 7 for you! Write on! Have a very lovely day Liam! :) Love and hugs! ^o^ xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 12:19:00 PM
truly very beautiful comment dorian thank you ever so kindly bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 7:27:00 AM
How beautiful this is.I hope you always have an angel in your life-Romantic! Charma
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 9:39:00 AM
the angels always shine with love includes my kids wonderful comment charmaine thank you kindly dear friend deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 6:32:00 AM
Sweet and Tender... with Hope and Trust.... bestowed from Heaven... Lovely! Something I have not seen! Thxs for the Dream! xo
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 9:35:00 AM
well not seen it myself but i felt close when i wrote this wonderful comment nina heartfelt beautiful bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 5:33:00 AM
Trust is the cornerstone of any relationship! To be in love is something but to be in love and to be loved is everything! Your poem was built on these concepts a magnificent edifice of admirable sentiments that no heart can remain unmoved! Excellent poetic expression!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 9:32:00 AM
demetrios truly heart touching wonderful comment dear pal i saw uncoditional love in my eyes when i wrote this thank you kindly dear friend such a pleasure your comment bless you
Date: 11/24/2014 11:53:00 PM
Simply angelic, Liam! Hugs, Rhonda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 5:21:00 AM
rhonda thank you heartfelt wonderful comment dear friend bless you xxx
Date: 11/24/2014 10:40:00 PM
To be in love with an angel....how romantic
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 5:18:00 AM
the only gift of something true and pure tim thank you dear friend wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/24/2014 8:49:00 PM
Delightful heartfelt romantic poem Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 5:06:00 AM
thank you brenda for the wonderful comment bless you dear friend

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