Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Greatest Gift

I really do trust you honey
all one asks of you in return love 
please don't hurt me as you're, gem precious
Sparking dazzles the sun setting rose 

Gold awakening a treasure feeling inside 
dreams become reality, you babe the nightshades
silk satin warm kissing a star one magic wish 
Embracing deeply thought, of your touch in fingers 
One light weaving, gently drawing, sweet pure and raw 
Emotions sweetheart soft, warmly, loving you true
Tenderly alone one gift love you're an angel

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wrote in a 9/12 syllable count

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Paul Schneiter December 1, 2014 at 10:07 PM A poetic treasure. Nothing more needs to be said (but bless those who have said it).

Eileen Manassian November 25, 2014 at 10:28 AM :) How sweet it must be to be in love with an angel, Liam. I hope that this angel is good to you. You deserve it. Hugs Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 12:27 PM the angel is the light eileen who takes away the darkness love at the end of the tunnel dear friend wonderful comment got me thinking, thank you so very kindly deeply appreciated bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 9:49 AM My very dear friend Liam, this is so beautiful! And I really enjoyed it so much. Yes the grestest gift of all..Love .Just so filled of love tenderness romance like true love should be.A 7 for you! Write on! Have a very lovely day Liam! :) Love and hugs! ^o^ xxxx D. Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 12:19 PM truly very beautiful comment dorian thank you ever so kindly bless you

Charmaine Chircop November 25, 2014 at 7:27 AM How beautiful this is.I hope you always have an angel in your life-Romantic! Charma Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 9:39 AM the angels always shine with love includes my kids wonderful comment charmaine thank you kindly dear friend deeply appreciated bless you

Ninette Carey November 25, 2014 at 6:32 AM Sweet and Tender... with Hope and Trust.... bestowed from Heaven... Lovely! Something I have not seen! Thxs for the Dream! xo Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 9:35 AM well not seen it myself but i felt close when i wrote this wonderful comment nina heartfelt beautiful bless you

Demetrios Trifiatis November 25, 2014 at 5:33 AM Trust is the cornerstone of any relationship! To be in love is something but to be in love and to be loved is everything! Your poem was built on these concepts a magnificent edifice of admirable sentiments that no heart can remain unmoved! Excellent poetic expression! Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 9:32 AM demetrios truly heart touching wonderful comment dear pal i saw uncoditional love in my eyes when i wrote this thank you kindly dear friend such a pleasure your comment bless you

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 24, 2014 at 11:53 PM Simply angelic, Liam! Hugs, Rhonda Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 5:21 AM rhonda thank you heartfelt wonderful comment dear friend bless you xxx

Tim Smith November 24, 2014 at 10:40 PM To be in love with an angel....how romantic Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 5:18 AM the only gift of something true and pure tim thank you dear friend wonderful comment bless you

Brenda Meier-Hans November 24, 2014 at 8:49 PM Delightful heartfelt romantic poem Liam. Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 5:06 AM thank you brenda for the wonderful comment bless you dear friend