Greatest Fear

I tremble at the thought of drowning,
I worry about wars, 
I find it horrifying to be burnt alive.
I scream and jump from 
 rodents, insects and, reptiles.
Yet, none of these are my greatest fear
and, seem trivial in compare.
The thing I fear above all fears,
is not even in or of this world.
I don't believe I'll ever have to 
face this fear but, somewhere,
in the very back recesses of my mind,
is the faintest of whispers,
almost inaudible, uttering,
"What If"?
Thus maliciously keeping my fear alive. 
Or, is this whisper keeping my fear
from being realized?
Should I then embrace this fear 
to remember 
what must and must not be done?
Is it possible that fear itself 
could keep me from that which I fear the most?
Thus avoiding ever facing Hell itself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/12/2016 12:46:00 PM
Many congrats Tamara:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/12/2016 8:46:00 AM
Congrats Tamara, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Tamara Reyna
Date: 8/1/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Teddy.
Date: 10/11/2016 8:05:00 PM
I oved this write Tamara, congratulations on ur win.
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Tamara Reyna
Date: 8/1/2017 11:45:00 AM
Why thank you Lewis.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 10/11/2016 8:05:00 PM
lllllllll loved :)
Date: 9/27/2016 5:56:00 PM
Is this for the comp? And don't worry, I died once for a spell and it is awesome, can't describe it but colourful and shiny. And I don't know where God was but I saw a Goddess in front of me. And she was beautiful beyond words.
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Tamara Reyna
Date: 9/27/2016 6:01:00 PM
Yes, this poem is intended for the contest. and thank you for the encouraging don't be afraid of death words.LOL I started writing a poem actually about fearing death till I realized Hell was my biggest fear not death.
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