Trevor Mcleod Poet Quatrain

Greater Poem

I come to you from Greater Sudbury.
The mayor Bigger too.
We offer you a greater pleasure.
Our natter greater through.

We're all about a greater mission.
The hope is greater too.
We'll look for you as greater tourists.
The pamphlets greatest woo.

We'll see you have a greater time.
Our scenery's greatest view.
Then put you in a great hotel;
your comfort greater through.

We'll sell you all our greatest goods.
The merchant's greatest phoo.
You'll travel all our greater roads.
The potholes greater too.

We'll show you all our greatest things.
The slag dump baring slough.
Then aww you with our great big nickel;
a chimney and ah-choo.

We'll miss you when you go to leave.
You're absence greater too.
Then hope you come again
when next year's season's due.

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Darlene De Beaulieu July 29, 2019 at 12:08 PM Hello Trevor McLeod, I have been to Sudbury a long time ago. I enjoyed the scenery along my travels there. I did see the Big Nickel. have a nice day my friend. Trevor Mcleod July 29, 2019 at 12:12 PM Glad you came Darlene. It's great scenery with over 300 lakes. Playful people and a great art community. Lots to do and many hobbies going on. Love the nature myself. Trevor