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Greatcoat

I'm my day the Army Was very frugal with our kit. Whenever possible if seemed They recycled every bit. My Greatcoat had certainly Been around for a while; It was of a different cloth And of a different style. With it back at the Billet I just couldn't wait To check the label for The manufacturers date. It read nineteen fourteen, From the Great War. I wondered how many Had worn it before. Had it seen combat, Endured the trenches' hell; If there'd been any bullet holes They'd been repaired well. Hanging from my spare frame I looked rather rum, And, being for those days tall Stood out like a sore thumb. It fitted where it touched And it was far too big Bringing down the wrath Of many a drill pig, In truth it looked like I'd been graciously lent A quite unique version of My own one man tent. I carried it with me Until my demob day When the QM staff Carefully folded it away. In truth I thought As I left it there It looked good enough for Many more years wear. At nearly fifty years old I wondered How many others would have it on Before it reached its retirement And was finally gone. I hoped the next owners, For I was sure there'd be more, Realised with respect it was A piece of history that they wore.

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Date: 4/20/2023 1:27:00 PM
great poem, terry! it's amazing to think of one coat worn through the years by many different soldiers. you've described this so well...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/21/2023 12:40:00 AM
Everything other than the day to day uniform was reissued ilene. Even bullets. I remember being issued with ammunition dated 1944 when on Courier Duty in 1962. It probably wouldn't have gone off. Thanks ilene.
Date: 4/20/2023 9:13:00 AM
The saddest part is that it would even have to be used again. Great story, Terry. Be well my friend. I will not be online tomorrow, so have a great weekend:)
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/21/2023 12:37:00 AM
What a great thought - a world without armies. Sadly it's not in the nature of the beast, Human Kind. Hope your weekend was good Daniel.
Date: 4/20/2023 2:34:00 AM
I used to think that when I purchased quaint old items from the op shops. What fine lady had worn the dress of lace, with its hem so finely stitched. I wondered if she had danced in it at stately balls, Not quite the same as seeing action in a war, but history all the same. Loved your poem Terry.
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Date: 4/20/2023 2:12:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts Terry, I used to buy Army Surplus in my pre goth teen years. Maybe it ended up on a teen who was trying to be alternative and helped protect them from anything in their world they were shielding from
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/21/2023 12:34:00 AM
I suppose it may eventually, but almost immediately it woiud go to one of the next intake after I handed it in. Recycling Dilly.

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