Andrea Dietrich Poet Jueju

Great Tree Wujue

Great tree / strong limbs jut
Storm comes / hard wind howls
Marred lawn / haul vast bits
Sad view / folks wear scowls

May 18, 2023
For  Let Us Rock Five - Wujue Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Suzette Richards

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Regina Mcintosh June 7, 2023 at 4:04 PM Wonderful win. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Constance La France June 7, 2023 at 4:42 AM Andrea, congratulations on your win, wonderful !

Suzette Richards June 6, 2023 at 2:03 AM Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Andrea.

Victor Buhagiar May 20, 2023 at 1:59 AM The tree must have darkened the view.

Susan Lawrence May 19, 2023 at 8:04 AM So descriptive dear Andrea ! I can see and feel the whole scene unfolding ! Trees are sacred . My parents planted a Redwood in their yard almost 40 years ago and it it close to 75 feet tall ! A gift for sure . Sending big hugs , Susan :) Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2023 at 2:33 PM wow.

Sara Kendrick May 19, 2023 at 2:49 AM The wind takes down limbs here quite often this spring. I am always asking for God's protection when the winds howl because we have some very large oaks in our yard. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2023 at 2:34 PM Twice the wind has torn big chunks out of that decorative pear tree. She has lost her former glory. it's sad.

Victor Buhagiar May 19, 2023 at 12:52 AM Must be a sturdy tree.

Joseph May May 18, 2023 at 5:55 PM Stormy weather wreaks havoc, Very nicely penned Andrea