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Great Swing

I swung a magazine in a speeding blaze, and killed five houseflies in three days. My statistics are good, and for my money, I'm better than Shohei Ohtunny.

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Date: 8/6/2025 4:20:00 PM
you and my hubby swatting at flies. He can literally catch them in his hand. Humorous poem...liked it, Sara
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David Crandall
Date: 8/7/2025 4:10:00 PM
Wow! My dad could catch flies with his hands. I'm not that fast - gotta use a magazine!

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