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Great Love Hurts

when your emails arrive
they're full but not so alive

your words are kind, nice
your message very concise

not a hint of  those things
that you know ails or stings

i should tell you
enlighten you

in the spaces there are signs
what i read between the lines

i  see and more i feel the acid rain
drops that are soaked in your pain

it feels like bullets against my hide
like a red hot iron buried in my side

i would like to say sorry
sorry that you hurt. sorry

in thinking of me you veil your truth
though you know it's a seedless fruit

inside you, what now must feel like an empty shell
there is still the you the one that always rang the bell

you know you are still yourself unpressed
the person i know that always impressed

but cuts don't heal from raw facts
they hide irritated in burlap sacks

behind a plastic mask
inside an empty flask

love-hurt spreads more than any tear
not just here or there but everywhere

it reflects any and all reason
lives void of all of any season

no spring winter summer or fall
it is tossed and bounced like a ball

left to its own devices
it morphs becomes a crisis

but you can't let it own you
just like yesterday this too

it will be tomorrow
days follow in a row

grab a very large clock
one with a key and a lock

only you can turn the hand
and stop the flow of sand

happy is a minute away
choose it now, today


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Date: 10/24/2015 5:48:00 AM
Looking for you in your oldies, Armand. Even in your early writes, one can already sense the deep sensitivity of your lines. Would love to read some more...hugs!
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Date: 3/23/2015 6:24:00 PM
Maurice, happy is a minute away, I must remember that for I am sad most of the time, congratulations on a wonderful win in the contest, this is a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:44:00 PM
HELLO MAURICE, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:23:00 PM
This one seems so heartfelt and personal, Maurice. I am guessing it is an ex, but I am not sure. One that really makes me curious!!
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:26:00 PM
You are dead on.
Date: 8/14/2014 8:19:00 PM
Oh our children [and I'm sure they say - Oh Ma!] my son & I are very emotional & we seem to feed off each other [not in a good way - we both want so much for the other to approve!] I've found [believe it or not] communication much clearer in texts!I have mentioned this to others with anxiety issues & they have found it a help too. - Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I would label your verse couplet BUT when in doubt Verse is always safe! Light & Love
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Date: 8/14/2014 7:50:00 AM
I too can be a measurer of words so I understand the act of holding back. This is a testament to the unspoken and the impact of those spaces. The proverbial elephant in the room. I raise a glass to finding the courage to say what needs to be said. Another fine piece of writing.
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