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Great Guns of Love

Daydreaming holding your hands love we came to the great walls of Derry sitting on the riverbank arising dream awakening sweetly pointing out its guns felt like singing into your ear your an adorable dream about this armored city enchanting castles trying to give you each and every day that very special bit of magic glow I was drawing pictures for you smiling saying how romantic sweet it felt for me, saying I thought it looked like a great battleship posing showing her strength or even pirates on land smiling overlooking the river Foyle sings out from the ripples, drawing how softly I saw it in my childhood vision only now adoring you the heart's queen It really sparkled telling you love this the first time with anyone, sharing this was with you honey just out of this world most loving of all dreams sparkled in such amazing beauty I remember reaching over softly to kiss you sweetie holding your hand just love your shyness thinking back with such gentle warmness truly my soul mate your smile shines in the mirrors, thanking God for having found you I am so happy this day such a memory with such a dream never ending blissful thoughts feelings of such joy spilling over just loving you so beautiful warm flickering the firelight so sorry if in any way I ever offend thee ,truly , never will it be my intention or will as the love for you grows stronger in the passing of each new moon each day with you beautiful never will i forget me not beautiful flower you are baby the secret vessel who shot me down good .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/4/2014 6:13:00 PM
Derry is indeed enchanting..I managed to visit Derry.I wish to re visit the beautiful Irish land.Magical poem sprinkling ethereal bliss of love and serenity.Wow
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Date: 9/4/2014 1:09:00 PM
Epic! Epic! Beautiful, Liam. I love reading you. You are what is good in the world. :)
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