Roy Pett Poet Footle

Great Feet

Toe nail
smell stale 

small toe
don’t grow

Hard skin
can’t win

sore sole
poor soul

dropped arch
quick march 

left right
frost bite 

big corn
Feel scorn

feet itch
right *****

One foot
stay put

two feet
great treat.

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Rachel Treacher March 22, 2026 at 11:48 AM Very funny! I love the left right, left right walking rhythm. So pleased I have discovered your work. I'm new to poetry soup!

Cheryl Hoffman March 20, 2018 at 7:26 PM An awesome foot footle Roy; Good luck in the contest!~Che :) Roy Pett March 21, 2018 at 8:02 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Cheryl much appreciated. :))

Vladislav Raven March 20, 2018 at 5:52 PM Hi Roy, have never tried this form before, to hard for me. Hope it goes well in the contest. Excellent write. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend....Mike. Roy Pett March 20, 2018 at 6:13 PM Thank you very much for your very kind comment and best wishes Mike, I have no doubt you would have no problem writing any form you’re very talented, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Harry Horsman March 18, 2018 at 5:18 PM Oh yes brilliant, should go well in contest..love these. Roy Pett March 18, 2018 at 6:19 PM Thanks Harry, I think it’s already a winner by receiving a comment like yours, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Tom Cunningham March 18, 2018 at 3:55 PM Well done Roy , you've certainly put your foot in lol Good luck. Tom Roy Pett March 18, 2018 at 4:16 PM Thanks Tom, I usually open my mouth and jump in with both feet, can be embarrassing, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Vijay Pandit March 18, 2018 at 3:30 PM Photo and your words go hand in hand Roy..well described..best for a win. Roy Pett March 18, 2018 at 4:12 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Vijay, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 2:30 PM - Cool :) - Luck in the contest, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Roy Pett March 18, 2018 at 2:44 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Anne-Lise, really appreciate your support. :))

Arturo Michael March 18, 2018 at 2:11 PM Nice one... Roy Pett March 18, 2018 at 2:41 PM Hi Arturo, thank you very much for your very kind comment, really appreciate your support. :))