Great Escape

Gardens gilded with every flower known to man 
Replete with wondrous waterfalls fresh flow,
Elysium sacred scenes to make souls soar with
Angels waiting, watching o'er our day
To keep us safe, to drive our fears away.

Eclectic words embraced, endowed with faith to
Sing sonorous songs in melodies of love with 
Candles burning bright to light the night
And glorious God and Goddess' blessings from above.
Perhaps with kindred kindness we eagerly entreat to
Elevate our souls with precious poetry's escape.

1-13-20

Great Escape Contest ~Second Place~
Sponsor John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 1/19/2020 6:21:00 PM
Hello Connie … the one place that is truly the avenue of escape. Creating and relaxing in a garden takes us to another world - thanks Connie - Lindsay
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Date: 1/16/2020 8:36:00 PM
you are poetry's mistress, and her guardian!! Wonderful, Connie.
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Date: 1/16/2020 12:54:00 PM
So many elements to this piece which you have blended to perfection. Enjoy what is left of the week. Regards as always David in NZ
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/16/2020 4:26:00 PM
Thank you very much David. New year blessings xxoo
Date: 1/16/2020 9:12:00 AM
Vividly descriptive WINNING piece, Connie. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 1/16/2020 7:14:00 AM
CONGRATS CONNIE to win. Hugs
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Date: 1/16/2020 7:09:00 AM
Back with congrats Connie on your podium win.
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Date: 1/15/2020 11:31:00 PM
Congratulations Connie, a well deserved win. And what a wstunning write, Panagiota xx
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Date: 1/15/2020 7:26:00 PM
I see I am in good company!, Congrats on your win Connie...
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Date: 1/15/2020 6:24:00 PM
what a way to escape Connie:-) many congrats on your win I love your unique take on escape:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2020 4:02:00 PM
Wow...this sounds like a heavenly escape. Very tranquil indeed. Congrats on your win, Connie :)
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Date: 1/15/2020 3:26:00 PM
Congrats Connie on your win in this contest. That really makes me smile.
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:27:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your top win :) hugs
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:08:00 PM
Wonderful write Connie, you never disappoint, your writing is always top notch, I loved this one, congrats on a great second place finish! Thanks for entering this beauty!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/15/2020 5:15:00 PM
Thank you very much for such a high placement John. Thank you for giving me inspiration to write it! xxoo
Date: 1/15/2020 6:28:00 AM
Ah yes, and you have penned it beautifully
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Date: 1/14/2020 8:27:00 PM
such a beautifully crafted acrostic Connie... the images are as gorgeous as they are peaceful...i love this, and perhaps i needed to see it tonight... hugs and blessings XoXo
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Date: 1/14/2020 6:06:00 PM
Great escapism, Connie...Goddess' huh!...where do I sign up lol...beautiful verse my dear friend...love from the Wingster :o)
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Date: 1/14/2020 5:21:00 PM
Beautifully done Connie, Best wishes in the Contest and thanks for the heads up on my title..much appreciated
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Date: 1/14/2020 5:03:00 PM
Great job! You may never escape this one! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/14/2020 12:53:00 PM
Connie, I love the thought of Angels watching over us. Serenity reigns in a world filled with "kindred kindness." For those who write, poetry is an escape; for those who read poetry, even more so. Great acrostic, my friend! Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/14/2020 7:52:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Connie. This has comforting feel to it and brings scenes of peace to the readers mind. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 1/14/2020 7:21:00 AM
Wonderful flow to your write, Connie and just the right mix of alliteration in precious poetic words. A sure win for you.
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Date: 1/14/2020 4:39:00 AM
It sure helps us escape from the doldrums of life Connie, well composed acrostic. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 1/14/2020 4:03:00 AM
precious poetry's escape.. I was wondering how you will end it and it ends beautifully.. Great entry in the contest.. Good luck Connie..
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/14/2020 4:25:00 AM
I want the reader to realize at the end that I was speaking about poetry. Thank you very much Jenish. xxoo
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