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Great Escape

Guilt and grief hold hostage Tessa’s mind, Ruining all attempts at normal life. Errors of her past caused others strife. Although they’re forgiving and so kind, Tessa can’t yet leave her guilt behind. Echoes of good days at last break through. She remembers when she used to pray, Crying cleansing tears, finding her way, And basking in forgiveness, feeling new. Phoenix rising, Tessa is today. Embers fade, outshone by sun’s bright rays. Date: January 11, 2020 Contest Title: Great Escape Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton January 27, 2020, entered in Strand Choice 7

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Date: 1/27/2020 2:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/27/2020 5:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Brenda. Janice
Date: 1/15/2020 5:08:00 PM
This reads so well Janice. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2020 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie. Janice
Date: 1/15/2020 2:43:00 PM
What an amazing write Janice, no one would know this is an acrostic, just what I was hoping for, congrats on a fine placement and thanks for entering!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2020 8:55:00 AM
John, thank you for these kind words and for my 4th place. Janice
Date: 1/12/2020 3:09:00 PM
damn, what an awful situation... you told a story through an acrostic.... nice one.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/12/2020 6:31:00 PM
Awful--turned good. Thanks so much, S.O. Janice
Date: 1/12/2020 8:05:00 AM
Rhymes give a wonderful flow to your acrostic--and the story is so special, Janice--loved the positive turn at the end.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/12/2020 1:45:00 PM
Thank you SO MUCH, Vijay! Janice
Date: 1/12/2020 3:53:00 AM
Good one.. Best wishes in the contest..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/12/2020 7:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jenish! Janice
Date: 1/11/2020 8:15:00 PM
nicely penned Janice...one would never know it was an acrostic by the wonderful flow... well crafted... best wishes in the contest...i am sure it will be on the winner's list... hugs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/11/2020 8:23:00 PM
THANK YOU so much, Sandra. Janice

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