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Great Escape

Good night my playful heart, waltz merrily in fairy dreams Reveling in memories of beloved blissful blossoming springs Engaging her wishes in music of gentle whispering winds Ascending to ecstasy, eliciting elatedly what romance is Traversing the night-sky, stargazing in her doting company. Exhilarating in her imagination of euphoric utopian abode Sketch for me what you mean by paradisiacal place on earth Captivating sensuous desires longing to inhabit Elysium, Affirm to my anxious world: fantasy never dwells in sorrow Playing for her on keys of piano, pleadings of my eternal hope Ecstatic to awaken me, when she acquiesces to call of love. January 11, 2020 Poem of the day on January 13, 2020 Placed 1st: Great Escape poetry contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Placed 3rd: Strand any form contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/31/2020 2:58:00 PM

You're a very talented writer, Vijay. Love your style!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/2/2020 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations for #3 on the top 100 new poem list :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:12:00 PM

Thank you for the return visit Heidi--much appreciate.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 1/31/2020 3:10:00 PM

Love the last line...and of course every line before it. Unique meter and choice of words Vijay;-)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Keith--many thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/30/2020 5:36:00 AM

This poem had me smiling from the first line. What a wonderful missive! Congrats on POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:10:00 PM

Much appreciate Caren--many thanks.

Ashok Kumar Mishra

Date: 1/25/2020 4:34:00 AM

Desiring hearts.... Belated Congrats on your POTD win

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Ashok--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/25/2020 4:24:00 AM

Vijay, how did I miss this gem of a poem, belated congratulations my friend on been awarded the honor of POTD. Blessings and poetic hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:09:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Jennifer--many thanks.

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2020 6:10:00 AM

Great choice for POTD.. Congrats

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:09:00 PM

Much appreciate, SO--many thanks.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/18/2020 2:40:00 PM

Vijay congratulations on your win!;)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/17/2020 11:09:00 AM

Wishing you so many congratulations dear Vijay for POTD and top win in John's contest. Both so well deserved my friend you really are a most talented poet Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:08:00 PM

So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks, Ann.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/16/2020 12:01:00 AM

Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Vijay.. You deserves it..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:07:00 PM

Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2020 7:33:00 PM

Congrats on your top win Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:06:00 PM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/15/2020 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Vijay! This poem was outstanding my friend. xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:06:00 PM

Much appreciate my friend your kind remarks--many thanks, Connie.

Chris Green

Date: 1/15/2020 2:56:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay on your top win. Your poem was beautifully written and so filled with love. It landed right where it should, at the top.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:05:00 PM

So very kind of Chris--much appreciate--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/15/2020 2:45:00 PM

Back for congrats on your first place win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:05:00 PM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/15/2020 2:23:00 PM

And now a third visit to say congratulations on your top win my friend. :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:04:00 PM

Much appreciate the return visits my friend--many thanks, Sandy.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/15/2020 2:04:00 PM

This is another example of your tremendous talent Vijay, congrats on another top win, thanks for entering!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/2/2020 2:04:00 PM

Thank you John--I value and appreciate your comments.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2020 5:38:00 AM

My favorite lines, "Exhilarating in her imagination of euphoric utopian abode Sketch for me what you mean by paradisiacal place on earth"; beautiful pen.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 7:56:00 AM

So glad you liked the line--much appreciate MLK--many thanks.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/14/2020 3:27:00 PM

A wonderful write, Vijay. Congratulations on POTD. CM

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2020 3:51:00 PM

Much appreciate Charlie--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2020 2:24:00 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vijay :) - // Anne-Lise

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2020 3:50:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/14/2020 3:17:00 AM

Always a great delight to read and fave your wonderful poetry, dear Vijay.. Congratulations on your POTD honour! A well earned recognition for the rainbow and beauty of your artistic work! Deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2020 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for the return visit Besma--much appreciate. And a special thank you for the FAVE.