Vijay Pandit Poet Acrostic

Great Escape

Good night my playful heart, waltz merrily in fairy dreams
Reveling in memories of beloved blissful blossoming springs 
Engaging her wishes in music of gentle whispering winds
Ascending to ecstasy, eliciting elatedly what romance is
Traversing the night-sky, stargazing in her doting company.

Exhilarating in her imagination of euphoric utopian abode
Sketch for me what you mean by paradisiacal place on earth
Captivating sensuous desires longing to inhabit Elysium, 
Affirm to my anxious world: fantasy never dwells in sorrow
Playing for her on keys of piano, pleadings of my eternal hope
Ecstatic to awaken me, when she acquiesces to call of love.

January 11, 2020
Poem of the day on January 13, 2020
Placed 1st: Great Escape poetry contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Placed 3rd: Strand any form contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree October 31, 2020 at 2:58 PM You're a very talented writer, Vijay. Love your style!

Heidi Sands February 2, 2020 at 12:00 PM Congratulations for #3 on the top 100 new poem list :) Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:12 PM Thank you for the return visit Heidi--much appreciate.

Keith O.J. Hunt January 31, 2020 at 3:10 PM Love the last line...and of course every line before it. Unique meter and choice of words Vijay;-) Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:11 PM Thank you Keith--many thanks.

Caren Krutsinger January 30, 2020 at 5:36 AM This poem had me smiling from the first line. What a wonderful missive! Congrats on POTD! Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:10 PM Much appreciate Caren--many thanks.

Ashok Kumar Mishra January 25, 2020 at 4:34 AM Desiring hearts.... Belated Congrats on your POTD win Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:10 PM Thank you Ashok--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos January 25, 2020 at 4:24 AM Vijay, how did I miss this gem of a poem, belated congratulations my friend on been awarded the honor of POTD. Blessings and poetic hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:09 PM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Jennifer--many thanks.

Silent One January 19, 2020 at 6:10 AM Great choice for POTD.. Congrats Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:09 PM Much appreciate, SO--many thanks.

Brenda Chiri January 18, 2020 at 2:40 PM Vijay congratulations on your win!;) Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:09 PM Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.

Ann Gilmour January 17, 2020 at 11:09 AM Wishing you so many congratulations dear Vijay for POTD and top win in John's contest. Both so well deserved my friend you really are a most talented poet Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:08 PM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks, Ann.

Jenish Somadas January 16, 2020 at 12:01 AM Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Vijay.. You deserves it.. Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:07 PM Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Joseph May January 15, 2020 at 7:33 PM Congrats on your top win Vijay Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:06 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong January 15, 2020 at 3:02 PM Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Vijay! This poem was outstanding my friend. xxoo Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:06 PM Much appreciate my friend your kind remarks--many thanks, Connie.

Chris Green January 15, 2020 at 2:56 PM Congratulations Vijay on your top win. Your poem was beautifully written and so filled with love. It landed right where it should, at the top. Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:05 PM So very kind of Chris--much appreciate--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues January 15, 2020 at 2:45 PM Back for congrats on your first place win! Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:05 PM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Sandra Adams January 15, 2020 at 2:23 PM And now a third visit to say congratulations on your top win my friend. :) hugs Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:04 PM Much appreciate the return visits my friend--many thanks, Sandy.

John Hamilton January 15, 2020 at 2:04 PM This is another example of your tremendous talent Vijay, congrats on another top win, thanks for entering! Vijay Pandit February 2, 2020 at 2:04 PM Thank you John--I value and appreciate your comments.

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2020 at 5:38 AM My favorite lines, "Exhilarating in her imagination of euphoric utopian abode Sketch for me what you mean by paradisiacal place on earth"; beautiful pen. Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 7:56 AM So glad you liked the line--much appreciate MLK--many thanks.

Charles Messina January 14, 2020 at 3:27 PM A wonderful write, Vijay. Congratulations on POTD. CM Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 3:51 PM Much appreciate Charlie--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2020 at 2:24 PM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vijay :) - // Anne-Lise Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 3:50 PM Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.

Besma Riabi Dziri January 14, 2020 at 3:17 AM Always a great delight to read and fave your wonderful poetry, dear Vijay.. Congratulations on your POTD honour! A well earned recognition for the rainbow and beauty of your artistic work! Deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 7:56 AM Thank you for the return visit Besma--much appreciate. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Harry Horsman January 14, 2020 at 12:00 AM An amazing poem, Vijay, love the flow, also the sentiment.. Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 7:54 AM So kind of you Harry--much appreciate--many thanks.

Eve Roper January 13, 2020 at 9:06 PM Back with a big congratulations on POTD Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 7:53 AM Thank you for the return visit Eve--much appreciate.

Sandra Adams January 13, 2020 at 6:23 PM congratulations on your potd my friend, i told you this one was wonderfully crafted... :) hugs Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 7:53 AM Appreciate the return visit Sandy--yes--you did say--many thanks my friend.

Heidi Sands January 13, 2020 at 4:02 PM Wow! An amazing, beautiful POTD Vijay! Congratulations :) Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 7:52 AM Much appreciate the kind feedback Heidi--many thanks.

Edward Ibeh January 13, 2020 at 3:29 PM Heartiest congratulations on your much deserved p.o.t.d. recognition, Vijay!:-) Here's hoping it wins the "Great Escape" contest as well! Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 7:52 AM Thank you Edward--much appreciate.

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