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'' GREAT DEEDS " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of rose and outdoors

Great Deeds To Perform

If one wishes in his life great deeds to perform 

Should not pray obstacles on his way not to find

But ought to ask fate hurdles on his path to put

Thus he strong to be and respected by mankind!  








©  Demetrios Trifiatis
       22 May 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 10:08 PM
Hi Demetrios, There is much wisdom in this verse, well said and well done. Have a wonderful weekend:-)Alexis
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May 22, 2021 at 10:45 AM
- If everything was as beautiful as your roses there would be no obstacles in life ... a wonderful poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 22, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Dearest friend Demetrios, this is the wise path of hope and faith. God has picked the more straightforward option; he made the stricter choice to provide us with the opportunity to transcend any hardships in life.
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May 22, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Thank you for your visit and for your input, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings. Stay healthy.
Pandit Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 5:02 AM
A guide to success my friend--so well said! Those two roses are awesome!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Thank you, my dearest friend, Vijay that apart from my writing you like my gardening and my photography. I am a happy mortal! Blessings!
Cunningham Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 1:55 AM
God shows us the way, he could have taken the easy route but chose not to, and we too should be prepared to face lifes obstacles and not always trying to avoid them. Have a lovely weekend Demetrios. Tom
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May 22, 2021 at 3:09 AM
We should put our trust in God who has foreseen all difficulties that we would face. Thank you for your kind visit and comment, my dearest friend, Tom. Blessings.
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