Great Day

It was really a joy to see you all
Certainly not a fancy dress ball

The jokes and laughter did abound
I'm so glad that you came around

We really should do this again
The problem being where and when

It makes me know friends need to be seen
I wish us to be closer than we have been

We may not see each other as much
But we really never do lose touch

Let us make it a pact that we will be
Closer this year than the previous three
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 12:27 PM
We need a Mama Bear just here to keep us closer this year than any other year before! We'll never lose touch... Love, Hanitra
Bear Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Thanks for the encouragement. I sent this to Richard for his own info and he had me post it. From one MamaBear to another I appreciate your comments. Edith
Manassian Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Delightful, Mama Bear. Very well written! I hope your wishes for closeness in the new year do come true.
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