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Graze In Daze

Short weekends and long weekdays School’s out then it’s onto résumés and workdays Mondays dragging on through to Fridays Long commutes on highways, subways and tramways Toiling for okays, some praise and hopefully a raise Soirees and negligees for Saturdays Aspiring to bouquets so enchanting in a vase Before you know it’s on for matinees on Sundays Enjoying soufflés, sorbets, sundaes and parfaits Eyeing the calendar for paydays As well as birthdays, holidays and getaways But nowadays, as retirees, we have our days And often we just graze in haze almost a daze Where Tuesdays look no different than Thursdays To paraphrase it’s our final phase when interplays In many ways the sweet nostalgia of yesterdays AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on March 13, 2018

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Date: 3/14/2018 5:01:00 AM
Im retired now and too be honest do not know where I found the time to go to work , I do miss the people but not the work as it was pressure ,pressure ,pressure, Great verse Line. Tom
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:50:00 AM
I know exactly what you mean, Tom. Thanks for your delightful visit and comment.
Date: 3/13/2018 10:09:00 PM
Your alliteration is delightful in this: souffles, sorbets, sundaes and parfaits. This is the first time I pictured you as a retiree; for some reason I have always thought of you as age 28. No idea why. I really like the wordplay in this. It sounds like you were having a lot of fun here.
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:52:00 AM
Forever 28 I'll take it! Thanks for that lovely visit and comment. Don't change your vision of me, I like it.
Date: 3/13/2018 7:02:00 PM
Great description Line! So truthful and real. Sometimes all the days of the week are the same to me except Friday,when I finally get to relax.
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for your charming visit and comment, Paulina. Much appreciated.

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