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I see a cherry tree in full blossom My heart soars to the heavens Gravity ensures my body doesn't follow. 25/5/14

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Date: 7/9/2014 8:51:00 PM
Awesome I love this one Darren!!
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Date: 7/8/2014 11:24:00 PM
Sweet win Darren...PD
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Date: 7/8/2014 8:49:00 PM
One of my favorites, Darren my friend.. congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/8/2014 5:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Darren.
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Date: 7/8/2014 3:57:00 PM
I love the thought of this one. It's so cool, Darren, but technically it has way too many syllables to be haiku. You could make this into a superb sijo!! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 7/8/2014 3:58:00 AM
Extended haiku... reaching out for a fruity heaven... falling out of a tree. that's gravity.. CONGRATS
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Date: 7/8/2014 2:21:00 AM
Fabulous write Darren ! Zero gravity wud take us to heavens ,, great imagery! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/8/2014 1:06:00 AM
Well done Darren great to see your name on the winners list. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:40:00 AM
Meaningful and interesting write, Darren
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Date: 7/8/2014 12:15:00 AM
Hi Darren, congratulations on a beautiful win! Well-deserved!
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:17:00 PM
Hello Darren, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:53:00 AM
Perfection in three little lines. Stunning write.
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Date: 5/25/2014 6:27:00 PM
simply stunning! Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 5/25/2014 2:24:00 PM
This ought to pull the ratings, Darren; superb! gl in contest. // paul
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Date: 5/25/2014 9:15:00 AM
Bad. Don't like it. Haha. Are you sure it's not going to fly away?
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Date: 5/25/2014 3:45:00 AM
nice one, perfect little poem ... cheers Alex
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Date: 5/25/2014 12:44:00 AM
Now THIS is wonderful!!!! soupmail.
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