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Gravity

Gravity


lovers forever
jealous Earth clings to her Moon –
a sweet entrapment


05-22-2014

Contest:     Picture This #1
Sponsor:     SKAT A
Placement:  4th

beautyearthmoonsciencehaiku

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Michael Cunningham

September 22, 2016 at 4:35 PM

WOW, I really liked that, thank you! Michael

Abdullah Alhemaidy

December 7, 2015 at 3:13 AM

Sweet Haiku from a Poetess point of view :)

Pandita Sietesantos

December 7, 2015 at 8:53 AM

Ahhhhhh! Thank you so much dear Abdullah for your lovely compliment! Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

January 26, 2015 at 10:45 AM

Pandita's poems "sweet entrapment". This one double.Love Pandita>rajat

Pandita Sietesantos

January 26, 2015 at 11:13 AM

My friend, thank you so very much! I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita

Brian Johnston

July 28, 2014 at 11:03 AM

Very nice but... If this were my poem I would not be able to leave it as just a Haiku, it would be too tempting to add... so few are aware yes earth's moon's unchanging face heat loss from moon tides I wonder is there such a thing as a 'Double Haiku?' Maybe we should invent a new genre? This is my very first Haiku and inspired by you. Hope you like it!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 28, 2014 at 2:12 PM

Brian it is so nice to receive your wonderful comments. In fact I agree with you because even I was tempted to do a double haiku as I have seen others before.And I am so very happy that I inspired you with my write - that is the biggest compliment of all!

Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2014 at 5:52 PM

Pandita :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Frank Polgar

July 15, 2014 at 8:16 PM

I like this haiku. Just like getting caught in the spider's web. Once you're trapped ...

Pandita Sietesantos

July 16, 2014 at 1:28 PM

Hi Frank, I am so glad you like this piece! Yes, spiders are pretty clever and know all about entrapment:-). Thank you my friend for your nice compliment. All the best to you!

Debbie Guzzi

July 9, 2014 at 7:53 PM

Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Pandita Sietesantos

July 10, 2014 at 7:01 AM

Thanks very much, Debbie. I appreciate the compliments! Pandita

Casarah Nance

July 9, 2014 at 7:53 PM

Ooh this one is terrific! I love it love it love it!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 10, 2014 at 7:01 AM

Hi Casarah, thank you so very much! I am very happy that you enjoyed this one!

Tim Smith

July 9, 2014 at 7:51 PM

:) wow romance :) congrats

Pandita Sietesantos

July 10, 2014 at 7:00 AM

Hi Tim, I appreciate your compliments as always. Thank you!

Mark J. Halliday

July 9, 2014 at 3:05 AM

Romantic. Nicely done.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 10, 2014 at 6:59 AM

Thank you, Mark, for stopping by and for your nice compliments. Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A

July 8, 2014 at 11:20 PM

Pandita, congratulations... Linda

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 11:26 PM

Thank you very much Linda, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.

Joseph May

July 8, 2014 at 10:07 PM

Congrats on a wonderful win Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 10:51 PM

Hi Joseph, many thanks, my friend for your thoughtful compliments as always!

Greg Hoffman

July 8, 2014 at 9:35 PM

Congrats on your win,well done

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 10:49 PM

Greg, thanks very much for your kind compliments!

Arlene Smith

July 8, 2014 at 8:33 PM

Pandita, only you could make gravity a love story.. Congrats on a great win, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 10:47 PM

Many thanks, Arlene, my friend for your always wonderful compliments that make my day!

Faye Gibson

July 8, 2014 at 5:39 PM

Beautiful, Pandita, one of my favorites. Congratulations.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 6:58 PM

Thank you very much Faye, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.

Andrea Dietrich

July 8, 2014 at 3:45 PM

wow. how did I never see this one? It's really sweet personification, and very original, Pandita. Congratulations in the contest.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 6:57 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea for your great compliments which I do appreciate. I'm glad that you enjoyed this one.

Paul Callus

July 8, 2014 at 10:11 AM

Enticing haiku, Pandita! Our minds worked in unison! Congratulations! // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 10:50 AM

Many thanks, dear Paul, for your sweet compliments as always!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 8, 2014 at 12:39 AM

That's really awesome Pandita! Congrats on deserved higher win!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 10:53 AM

Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so very much for your great compliments!

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 8, 2014 at 12:23 AM

Awesome interpretation, Pandita. congrats on the win

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 10:54 AM

Thank you very much, dear Dr. Ram for your great compliments!

Skat A

July 7, 2014 at 9:14 PM

Pandita, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

July 7, 2014 at 11:38 PM

Hi SKAT, thank you so very much for honoring me with a placement in your contest! I am very delighted by this encouraging win! Warmest regards.

Hija De La Luna

June 28, 2014 at 11:55 PM

Beautiful image, Pandita! Great write, too!

Pandita Sietesantos

June 29, 2014 at 11:55 AM

Thank you dear hija, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.

John Michaels

June 5, 2014 at 4:29 AM

Lovely poem... the competition is definitely fierce on this one...

Pandita Sietesantos

June 5, 2014 at 6:47 AM

Many thanks again, John. While this is one of my favorites, you are right about the competition - I've seen some gems posted!

Pandita Sietesantos

May 27, 2014 at 12:44 PM

Thank you, Mohan!

Mohan Chutani

May 27, 2014 at 12:34 PM

sharp one. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos

June 5, 2014 at 10:25 AM

Thank you, Mohan! I appreciate you visit!

Kelly Deschler

May 26, 2014 at 3:38 PM

This is an interesting take on the gravity theme. A very nice write, Pandita! Good luck in the contest!

Pandita Sietesantos

May 26, 2014 at 6:04 PM

Kelly, many thanks for your kind comments. I really appreciate them!

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