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Gravity

Gravity


lovers forever
jealous Earth clings to her Moon –
a sweet entrapment


05-22-2014

Contest:     Picture This #1
Sponsor:     SKAT A
Placement:  4th

Copyright © Pandita Sietesantos | Year Posted 2014

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Michael Cunningham Date: 9/22/2016 4:35:00 PM WOW, I really liked that, thank you! Michael Login to Reply

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 12/7/2015 3:13:00 AM Sweet Haiku from a Poetess point of view :) Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 12/7/2015 8:53:00 AM Ahhhhhh! Thank you so much dear Abdullah for your lovely compliment! Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 1/26/2015 10:45:00 AM Pandita's poems "sweet entrapment". This one double.Love Pandita>rajat Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 1/26/2015 11:13:00 AM My friend, thank you so very much! I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita

Brian Johnston Date: 7/28/2014 11:03:00 AM Very nice but... If this were my poem I would not be able to leave it as just a Haiku, it would be too tempting to add... so few are aware yes earth's moon's unchanging face heat loss from moon tides I wonder is there such a thing as a 'Double Haiku?' Maybe we should invent a new genre? This is my very first Haiku and inspired by you. Hope you like it! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/28/2014 2:12:00 PM Brian it is so nice to receive your wonderful comments. In fact I agree with you because even I was tempted to do a double haiku as I have seen others before.And I am so very happy that I inspired you with my write - that is the biggest compliment of all!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/23/2014 5:52:00 PM Pandita :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Frank Polgar Date: 7/15/2014 8:16:00 PM I like this haiku. Just like getting caught in the spider's web. Once you're trapped ... Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/16/2014 1:28:00 PM Hi Frank, I am so glad you like this piece! Yes, spiders are pretty clever and know all about entrapment:-). Thank you my friend for your nice compliment. All the best to you!

Casarah Nance Date: 7/9/2014 7:53:00 PM Ooh this one is terrific! I love it love it love it! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/10/2014 7:01:00 AM Hi Casarah, thank you so very much! I am very happy that you enjoyed this one!

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/9/2014 7:53:00 PM Congrad's on your win Light & Love Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/10/2014 7:01:00 AM Thanks very much, Debbie. I appreciate the compliments! Pandita

Tim Smith Date: 7/9/2014 7:51:00 PM :) wow romance :) congrats Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/10/2014 7:00:00 AM Hi Tim, I appreciate your compliments as always. Thank you!

Mark J. Halliday Date: 7/9/2014 3:05:00 AM Romantic. Nicely done. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/10/2014 6:59:00 AM Thank you, Mark, for stopping by and for your nice compliments. Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/8/2014 11:20:00 PM Pandita, congratulations... Linda Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 11:26:00 PM Thank you very much Linda, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.

Joseph May Date: 7/8/2014 10:07:00 PM Congrats on a wonderful win Pandita Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 10:51:00 PM Hi Joseph, many thanks, my friend for your thoughtful compliments as always!

Greg Hoffman Date: 7/8/2014 9:35:00 PM Congrats on your win,well done Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 10:49:00 PM Greg, thanks very much for your kind compliments!

Arlene Smith Date: 7/8/2014 8:33:00 PM Pandita, only you could make gravity a love story.. Congrats on a great win, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 10:47:00 PM Many thanks, Arlene, my friend for your always wonderful compliments that make my day!

Faye Gibson Date: 7/8/2014 5:39:00 PM Beautiful, Pandita, one of my favorites. Congratulations. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 6:58:00 PM Thank you very much Faye, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/8/2014 3:45:00 PM wow. how did I never see this one? It's really sweet personification, and very original, Pandita. Congratulations in the contest. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 6:57:00 PM Thank you very much, Andrea for your great compliments which I do appreciate. I'm glad that you enjoyed this one.

Paul Callus Date: 7/8/2014 10:11:00 AM Enticing haiku, Pandita! Our minds worked in unison! Congratulations! // paul Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 10:50:00 AM Many thanks, dear Paul, for your sweet compliments as always!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/8/2014 12:39:00 AM That's really awesome Pandita! Congrats on deserved higher win! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 10:53:00 AM Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so very much for your great compliments!

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/8/2014 12:23:00 AM Awesome interpretation, Pandita. congrats on the win Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/8/2014 10:54:00 AM Thank you very much, dear Dr. Ram for your great compliments!

Skat A Date: 7/7/2014 9:14:00 PM Pandita, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/7/2014 11:38:00 PM Hi SKAT, thank you so very much for honoring me with a placement in your contest! I am very delighted by this encouraging win! Warmest regards.

Hija De La Luna Date: 6/28/2014 11:55:00 PM Beautiful image, Pandita! Great write, too! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/29/2014 11:55:00 AM Thank you dear hija, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.

John Michaels Date: 6/5/2014 4:29:00 AM Lovely poem... the competition is definitely fierce on this one... Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/5/2014 6:47:00 AM Many thanks again, John. While this is one of my favorites, you are right about the competition - I've seen some gems posted!

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/27/2014 12:44:00 PM Thank you, Mohan! Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 5/27/2014 12:34:00 PM sharp one. Mohan Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/5/2014 10:25:00 AM Thank you, Mohan! I appreciate you visit!

Kelly Deschler Date: 5/26/2014 3:38:00 PM This is an interesting take on the gravity theme. A very nice write, Pandita! Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/26/2014 6:04:00 PM Kelly, many thanks for your kind comments. I really appreciate them!

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