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lovers forever jealous Earth clings to her Moon – a sweet entrapment
05-22-2014 Contest: Picture This #1 Sponsor: SKAT A Placement: 4th

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Date: 9/22/2016 4:35:00 PM
WOW, I really liked that, thank you! Michael
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:13:00 AM
Sweet Haiku from a Poetess point of view :)
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Date: 12/7/2015 8:53:00 AM
Ahhhhhh! Thank you so much dear Abdullah for your lovely compliment! Pandita
Date: 1/26/2015 10:45:00 AM
Pandita's poems "sweet entrapment". This one double.Love Pandita>rajat
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 1/26/2015 11:13:00 AM
My friend, thank you so very much! I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/28/2014 11:03:00 AM
Very nice but... If this were my poem I would not be able to leave it as just a Haiku, it would be too tempting to add... so few are aware yes earth's moon's unchanging face heat loss from moon tides I wonder is there such a thing as a 'Double Haiku?' Maybe we should invent a new genre? This is my very first Haiku and inspired by you. Hope you like it!
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/28/2014 2:12:00 PM
Brian it is so nice to receive your wonderful comments. In fact I agree with you because even I was tempted to do a double haiku as I have seen others before.And I am so very happy that I inspired you with my write - that is the biggest compliment of all!
Date: 7/23/2014 5:52:00 PM
Pandita :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/15/2014 8:16:00 PM
I like this haiku. Just like getting caught in the spider's web. Once you're trapped ...
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/16/2014 1:28:00 PM
Hi Frank, I am so glad you like this piece! Yes, spiders are pretty clever and know all about entrapment:-). Thank you my friend for your nice compliment. All the best to you!
Date: 7/9/2014 7:53:00 PM
Ooh this one is terrific! I love it love it love it!
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Date: 7/10/2014 7:01:00 AM
Hi Casarah, thank you so very much! I am very happy that you enjoyed this one!
Date: 7/9/2014 7:53:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/10/2014 7:01:00 AM
Thanks very much, Debbie. I appreciate the compliments! Pandita
Date: 7/9/2014 7:51:00 PM
:) wow romance :) congrats
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/10/2014 7:00:00 AM
Hi Tim, I appreciate your compliments as always. Thank you!
Date: 7/9/2014 3:05:00 AM
Romantic. Nicely done.
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Date: 7/10/2014 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, Mark, for stopping by and for your nice compliments. Best wishes.
Date: 7/8/2014 11:20:00 PM
Pandita, congratulations... Linda
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/8/2014 11:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Linda, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.
Date: 7/8/2014 10:07:00 PM
Congrats on a wonderful win Pandita
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/8/2014 10:51:00 PM
Hi Joseph, many thanks, my friend for your thoughtful compliments as always!
Date: 7/8/2014 9:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win,well done
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/8/2014 10:49:00 PM
Greg, thanks very much for your kind compliments!
Date: 7/8/2014 8:33:00 PM
Pandita, only you could make gravity a love story.. Congrats on a great win, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/8/2014 10:47:00 PM
Many thanks, Arlene, my friend for your always wonderful compliments that make my day!
Date: 7/8/2014 5:39:00 PM
Beautiful, Pandita, one of my favorites. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/8/2014 6:58:00 PM
Thank you very much Faye, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.
Date: 7/8/2014 3:45:00 PM
wow. how did I never see this one? It's really sweet personification, and very original, Pandita. Congratulations in the contest.
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/8/2014 6:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea for your great compliments which I do appreciate. I'm glad that you enjoyed this one.
Date: 7/8/2014 10:11:00 AM
Enticing haiku, Pandita! Our minds worked in unison! Congratulations! // paul
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/8/2014 10:50:00 AM
Many thanks, dear Paul, for your sweet compliments as always!
Date: 7/8/2014 12:39:00 AM
That's really awesome Pandita! Congrats on deserved higher win!
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Date: 7/8/2014 10:53:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so very much for your great compliments!
Date: 7/8/2014 12:23:00 AM
Awesome interpretation, Pandita. congrats on the win
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Date: 7/8/2014 10:54:00 AM
Thank you very much, dear Dr. Ram for your great compliments!
Date: 7/7/2014 9:14:00 PM
Pandita, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 7/7/2014 11:38:00 PM
Hi SKAT, thank you so very much for honoring me with a placement in your contest! I am very delighted by this encouraging win! Warmest regards.
Date: 6/28/2014 11:55:00 PM
Beautiful image, Pandita! Great write, too!
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 6/29/2014 11:55:00 AM
Thank you dear hija, for your lovely compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards.
Date: 6/5/2014 4:29:00 AM
Lovely poem... the competition is definitely fierce on this one...
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 6/5/2014 6:47:00 AM
Many thanks again, John. While this is one of my favorites, you are right about the competition - I've seen some gems posted!
Date: 5/27/2014 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Mohan!
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Date: 5/27/2014 12:34:00 PM
sharp one. Mohan
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 6/5/2014 10:25:00 AM
Thank you, Mohan! I appreciate you visit!
Date: 5/26/2014 3:38:00 PM
This is an interesting take on the gravity theme. A very nice write, Pandita! Good luck in the contest!
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Pandita SieteSantos
Date: 5/26/2014 6:04:00 PM
Kelly, many thanks for your kind comments. I really appreciate them!
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