graveyard hiku

kohl tombstones enveloped by mist . . . the vanished moon

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/21/2025 9:38:00 AM

Haunting and beautiful image here - <3

Karen Jones

Date: 4/17/2025 5:15:00 AM

Haha I too thought of the clothing store but will ask google to explain! Lovely read

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/15/2025 7:37:00 PM

Very cool!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/15/2025 3:49:00 PM

For Brian? Now I'm curious what Kohl means in this context, I only know it as a store that sends me monthly bills. Very clever, still don't get the 'mod' syllable count, will have to wrap my mind around that. Enjoyed. Love ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2025 12:11:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this creative Haiku write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful spring day.........

Mike Bayles

Date: 4/15/2025 10:10:00 AM

I agree with Andrea. The last ling is stunning.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/15/2025 3:04:00 AM

- Great hiku, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs