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Grave Tones Dark Glamour

Though much maligned, patiently, I wait for the fall of beauty to be enthralled and rest within my iron gate, where love and innocence is recalled. I have wrapped your hull in gentleness and adorned your amorphous soul, entombed, in wombed, guardian I, rock you bringing fond memories which coalesce and ensorceled lullabies to this knoll. Dark is the glamour which bids you adieu.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/12/2012 11:57:00 PM
I, too, was greeted with a new friend in "ensorceled." I love poetry that affords me the opportunity to learn, so thanks for that. "Amorphous soul" was intriguing, too, since I thoughs all souls were amorphous, but I shall think on it. As I've said before, I always welcome new excuses to think. :-) -Dean
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Date: 7/1/2012 10:15:00 AM
Wow Debbie - Mirror mirror on the wall. Thank you for this haunting that lingers with me. Oh how you bring home the starkness with that last line. "ensorceled" is a brilliant word I never knew and these words: "in wombed, guardian, I, rock you" are stunning. love, Kathy love, Kathy
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Date: 6/30/2012 7:31:00 PM
Yes....an intensity I find quite charming! Deb...jimbo
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Date: 6/28/2012 5:57:00 PM
An amazing poem -short and cute. I have thoroughly enjoyed its beauty, Debbie. -Mohammad
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