Gratitude

The rain held off 'til I made it to my car a few blocks away after work. The labs show my cough's on a relative par with most quirks. My son has his head on straight daughter is profligate in the most beautiful way. Their dad slowly shedding his hate my ex-lover has a new mate who's encouraging his feng shui. Flowers are blooming universe grooming us forcefully gently for pay day.

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2011 8:54:00 AM

It's nice to hear life's good : ) Thanks, Nancy - the contest was great fun

Tony Lane

Date: 10/27/2011 4:54:00 AM

It sounds good to me. Tony

Valerie Sherman

Date: 10/26/2011 8:27:00 PM

Thank you Nancy for sponsoring a great contest...Valerie

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 10/26/2011 8:13:00 PM

Peace given, peace received... you know, for all the thunderbolts you occasionally like to toss about, the zappers that make me choke out a laugh, you're truly a white light girl, ain't cha? :-) Blessings and Namaste. I so enjoyed reading this.

Rick Parise

Date: 10/26/2011 7:59:00 PM

I have heard a couple RAGE songs...I didn't know my "Gratitude" poem brought a reminder of their style.....COOL

Rick Parise

Date: 10/26/2011 7:55:00 PM

I like this one ~ cool approach..........very creative~God bless you and yourzz!!!

Rick Parise
Date: 10/26/2011 7:56:00 PM

Thank you for the placement in your contest!!!!!!Hurrah()()()()