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Grape Fruits

slightly sour juice squeezed from succulent small grape fruits-- this wine smells better slightly sour juice squeezed from succulent small grape fruits-- vine has more of them slightly sour juice squeezed from succulent small grape fruits-- raisins made for me CONTEST:"Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes" sponsored by Alfred Vassallo.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/20/2013 8:21:00 PM
Dear O.A. My name is Phillip Rollings "Flipper to my friends and you are a friend. I am writing you because Chef asked me to. He is recoverying quite well.He will be back home next Sat. Good luck in the contest. If you haven't read his last post or the blog he asked me to write; please do so this comment makes sense to you. Respectfully Flipper
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Date: 5/18/2013 12:24:00 AM
what a cute title you put for these!!! I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/17/2013 10:05:00 AM
Well done... Best wishes bro. AO
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Date: 5/5/2013 3:31:00 PM
clever play on words - congrats on your wins: )
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Date: 5/4/2013 6:09:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading this one this eve..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2013 3:32:00 PM
I enjoyed this very much...especially the last line...
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