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Grandsons

Car doors slam, country quiet broken
A race ensues… front door flies open
Dogs start barking, excitedly running
A happy day... grandsons are coming

Overnight bags in a flash are dropped
Energy released can never be stopped
"Papaw! Momo! We're here!" they yell
All that is missing is a ringing doorbell

Hugs, big smiles, checking all rooms
We stay mostly outside all afternoon
A walk up the driveway for a short hike
Playing on porch or riding their bikes

At supper they tell all that they know
Story after story and swear it is so
Baths, snacks, teeth brushed and bed
Tucked in kisses after prayers are said

Tired dogs look at us with questioning eyes
Is this temporary or for the rest of our lives?
Beside each child they settle for the night
On alert for a sign something's not right

Exhausted, we smile at our pride and joys
Grateful to have this time with the boys

8/10/16

Pure Childlike Fun and Enthusiasm Contest by Carin Krutsinger
Third Place - June 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Wonderful poem, Susan, that brings back memories to me of the young grandchildren, now grown. Those were the days and you've captured the fun in your poem. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 6:39 PM
Why thank you. Sandra! Appreciate your comment. :)
Rose  Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 5:23 AM
They grow up so fast, the only way to enjoy them is in the moment, and hopefully it last. Congratulations on your winning poem Susan.
Gentry Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Thanks, Pixie! Yes they do.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:37 AM
I don’t have grand kids yet but you make it seem like fun. Congrats on your win.
Gentry Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Thank you. Oh yes, we are blessed. :)
Wigley Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 12:56 AM
You can relive bits of childhood through your offspring and theirs, which is an irreplaceable joy. Congrats on a fine win, Susan. Viv
Gentry Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 6:32 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Roper Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations, Susan, on your great win.. I love my grandchildren and all the fun things that we do together without their parents..Hugs Eve ~`*
Gentry Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Why, thank you. Did not know!! Yes, I agree.
Lindley Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:27 AM
I SIMPLY COULD NOT HAVE ASKED FOR A BETTER POEM TO READ THIS FINE MORN MY FRIEND! MY CHILDREN AND GRANDCHILDREN ARE MY TREASURE. This inspiring gem has captured the love , joy and time spent with grandkids so well. A fav and a true gem this is...
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Thank you so much. You just made my day!
Terry Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 9:40 PM
This poem made me smile and enjoy your day with you and the grandsons. I love the lines about the dogs questioning the duration of the 'change of pace'. Hugs. Janece
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Thanks Janece. Glad you enjoyed.
Thomas Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 10:13 PM
Lol my grandson is my joy as well. Loved this :)
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Thanks. So glad you did.
Inman Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 7:55 PM
A lovely poem Susan.
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Thanks.
Turner Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Sounds fun Susan. I caught myself smiling as I was reading. I guess that means I liked it. lol. Great stuff, especially the dogs. I'll bet they love the kids! Sounds wonderful!
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Ahhh... smiling always a good thing. Thank you.
Mark Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Great flow Susan, certainly captured the energy, rhymes seem spot on with decent meter, ...well done ...Ian
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thanks! I appreciate you...
Godwin Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:17 AM
Sense of humor has always been my parental 'drug of choice.' Isn't it therapeutic? And what a great, entertaining and resonating write you penned, Susan. I sure enjoyed the energetic ride (I could well imagine!) ... CayCay
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Wigley Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Captures the chaos perfectly, Susan, and the meter suits the subject so well, that non-stop mayhem. Lovely little write, enjoyed. Viv x
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Thanks so much Viv! Appreciate your input. Glad you enjoyed.
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