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Car doors slam, country quiet broken A race ensues… front door flies open Dogs start barking, excitedly running A happy day... grandsons are coming Overnight bags in a flash are dropped Energy released can never be stopped "Papaw! Momo! We're here!" they yell All that is missing is a ringing doorbell Hugs, big smiles, checking all rooms We stay mostly outside all afternoon A walk up the driveway for a short hike Playing on porch or riding their bikes At supper they tell all that they know Story after story and swear it is so Baths, snacks, teeth brushed and bed Tucked in kisses after prayers are said Tired dogs look at us with questioning eyes Is this temporary or for the rest of our lives? Beside each child they settle for the night On alert for a sign something's not right Exhausted, we smile at our pride and joys Grateful to have this time with the boys 8/10/16 Pure Childlike Fun and Enthusiasm Contest by Carin Krutsinger Third Place - June 2018

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Date: 7/1/2018 5:55:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Susan, that brings back memories to me of the young grandchildren, now grown. Those were the days and you've captured the fun in your poem. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/1/2018 6:39:00 PM
Why thank you. Sandra! Appreciate your comment. :)
Date: 7/1/2018 5:23:00 AM
They grow up so fast, the only way to enjoy them is in the moment, and hopefully it last. Congratulations on your winning poem Susan.
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Date: 7/1/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thanks, Pixie! Yes they do.
Date: 7/1/2018 1:37:00 AM
I don’t have grand kids yet but you make it seem like fun. Congrats on your win.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/1/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you. Oh yes, we are blessed. :)
Date: 7/1/2018 12:56:00 AM
You can relive bits of childhood through your offspring and theirs, which is an irreplaceable joy. Congrats on a fine win, Susan. Viv
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/1/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/30/2018 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Susan, on your great win.. I love my grandchildren and all the fun things that we do together without their parents..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/30/2018 2:52:00 PM
Why, thank you. Did not know!! Yes, I agree.
Date: 3/22/2018 8:27:00 AM
I SIMPLY COULD NOT HAVE ASKED FOR A BETTER POEM TO READ THIS FINE MORN MY FRIEND! MY CHILDREN AND GRANDCHILDREN ARE MY TREASURE. This inspiring gem has captured the love , joy and time spent with grandkids so well. A fav and a true gem this is...
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/22/2018 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much. You just made my day!
Date: 3/19/2018 9:40:00 PM
This poem made me smile and enjoy your day with you and the grandsons. I love the lines about the dogs questioning the duration of the 'change of pace'. Hugs. Janece
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thanks Janece. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 12/14/2017 10:13:00 PM
Lol my grandson is my joy as well. Loved this :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thanks. So glad you did.
Date: 10/6/2016 7:55:00 PM
A lovely poem Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/22/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 8/11/2016 7:56:00 AM
Sounds fun Susan. I caught myself smiling as I was reading. I guess that means I liked it. lol. Great stuff, especially the dogs. I'll bet they love the kids! Sounds wonderful!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/22/2018 1:39:00 PM
Ahhh... smiling always a good thing. Thank you.
Date: 8/11/2016 7:07:00 AM
Great flow Susan, certainly captured the energy, rhymes seem spot on with decent meter, ...well done ...Ian
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/22/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thanks! I appreciate you...
Date: 8/11/2016 1:17:00 AM
Sense of humor has always been my parental 'drug of choice.' Isn't it therapeutic? And what a great, entertaining and resonating write you penned, Susan. I sure enjoyed the energetic ride (I could well imagine!) ... CayCay
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Date: 8/11/2016 12:03:00 AM
Captures the chaos perfectly, Susan, and the meter suits the subject so well, that non-stop mayhem. Lovely little write, enjoyed. Viv x
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/22/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Viv! Appreciate your input. Glad you enjoyed.

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