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Grandsons

Car doors slam, country quiet broken
A race ensues… front door flies open
Dogs start barking, excitedly running
A happy day... grandsons are coming

Overnight bags in a flash are dropped
Energy released can never be stopped
"Papaw! Momo! We're here!" they yell
All that is missing is a ringing doorbell

Hugs, big smiles, checking all rooms
We stay mostly outside all afternoon
A walk up the driveway for a short hike
Playing on porch or riding their bikes

At supper they tell all that they know
Story after story and swear it is so
Baths, snacks, teeth brushed and bed
Tucked in kisses after prayers are said

Tired dogs look at us with questioning eyes
Is this temporary or for the rest of our lives?
Beside each child they settle for the night
On alert for a sign something's not right

Exhausted, we smile at our pride and joys
Grateful to have this time with the boys

8/10/16

Pure Childlike Fun and Enthusiasm Contest by Carin Krutsinger
Third Place - June 2018

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Sandra Haight Date: 7/1/2018 5:55:00 PM Wonderful poem, Susan, that brings back memories to me of the young grandchildren, now grown. Those were the days and you've captured the fun in your poem. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 7/1/2018 6:39:00 PM Why thank you. Sandra! Appreciate your comment. :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/1/2018 5:23:00 AM They grow up so fast, the only way to enjoy them is in the moment, and hopefully it last. Congratulations on your winning poem Susan. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 7/1/2018 6:35:00 PM Thanks, Pixie! Yes they do.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/1/2018 1:37:00 AM I don’t have grand kids yet but you make it seem like fun. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 7/1/2018 6:33:00 PM Thank you. Oh yes, we are blessed. :)

Viv Wigley Date: 7/1/2018 12:56:00 AM You can relive bits of childhood through your offspring and theirs, which is an irreplaceable joy. Congrats on a fine win, Susan. Viv Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 7/1/2018 6:32:00 PM Thank you so much! :)

Eve Roper Date: 6/30/2018 10:42:00 AM Congratulations, Susan, on your great win.. I love my grandchildren and all the fun things that we do together without their parents..Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 6/30/2018 2:52:00 PM Why, thank you. Did not know!! Yes, I agree.

Robert Lindley Date: 3/22/2018 8:27:00 AM I SIMPLY COULD NOT HAVE ASKED FOR A BETTER POEM TO READ THIS FINE MORN MY FRIEND! MY CHILDREN AND GRANDCHILDREN ARE MY TREASURE. This inspiring gem has captured the love , joy and time spent with grandkids so well. A fav and a true gem this is... Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/22/2018 1:45:00 PM Thank you so much. You just made my day!

Jan Terry Date: 3/19/2018 9:40:00 PM This poem made me smile and enjoy your day with you and the grandsons. I love the lines about the dogs questioning the duration of the 'change of pace'. Hugs. Janece Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/22/2018 1:43:00 PM Thanks Janece. Glad you enjoyed.

FJ Thomas Date: 12/14/2017 10:13:00 PM Lol my grandson is my joy as well. Loved this :) Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/22/2018 1:42:00 PM Thanks. So glad you did.

James Inman Date: 10/6/2016 7:55:00 PM A lovely poem Susan. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/22/2018 1:41:00 PM Thanks.

Daniel Turner Date: 8/11/2016 7:56:00 AM Sounds fun Susan. I caught myself smiling as I was reading. I guess that means I liked it. lol. Great stuff, especially the dogs. I'll bet they love the kids! Sounds wonderful! Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/22/2018 1:39:00 PM Ahhh... smiling always a good thing. Thank you.

Anthony Mark Date: 8/11/2016 7:07:00 AM Great flow Susan, certainly captured the energy, rhymes seem spot on with decent meter, ...well done ...Ian Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/22/2018 1:36:00 PM Thanks! I appreciate you...

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/11/2016 1:17:00 AM Sense of humor has always been my parental 'drug of choice.' Isn't it therapeutic? And what a great, entertaining and resonating write you penned, Susan. I sure enjoyed the energetic ride (I could well imagine!) ... CayCay Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/22/2018 1:35:00 PM Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed.

Viv Wigley Date: 8/11/2016 12:03:00 AM Captures the chaos perfectly, Susan, and the meter suits the subject so well, that non-stop mayhem. Lovely little write, enjoyed. Viv x Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/22/2018 1:32:00 PM Thanks so much Viv! Appreciate your input. Glad you enjoyed.