Grandsons

these boys wear me down and lift me up on shoulders — torrentially blest 11/18/2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/18/2018 5:56:00 PM

There is NOTHING as great. If you think your children are fun, you are in for a triple-super-dooper-amazing surprise when they start getting married and plop their babies in your lap.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2018 8:39:00 PM

So true!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2018 4:00:00 PM

I hope one day to be a grandma Kim, your poem is very moving:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2018 5:45:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/18/2018 2:55:00 PM

Having three myself Kim I know where you're coming from. But blest is definitely the right word. Precious moments indeed. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2018 5:44:00 PM

Thank you, Tom!