Grandpa's Wish

Back in 1933 when
I was only ten
Grandpa Leroy came to live
With me and Ma and Ben

Grandpa had a yearning
Since he was a tyke
To fill his boyhood fantasy
And own a shiny bike

But times were tough in Grandpa's time
And life it was no joy
Because  his parents told him
They could not afford a toy

So two days after Gramps arrived
When he'd unpacked his trunk
He asked us kids where in this town
He'd find some good used junk

We took him to the junkyard dog
Whose dump was one mile hike
And asked old Earl if he had the parts
To make old Gramps a bike

Within an hour the "dog" produced
A bent up frame and wheel
Some broken spokes, a twisted chain
And offered the best of deals

The seat was missing, the fender crushed
But Grandpa didn't stammer
He knew that frame wouldn't misbehave
When he hit it with a hammer

"It's taken me these sixty years
To own this bike, he sighed
And now the thing that's left to do
Is finally learn to ride!

Up at dawn and in his shed
A 'pounding on the steel
Trying to turn a broken wreck
To something that looked real

We'd hear him cuss when he smashed his thumb
Or the wheel wasn't right
And his cursing would continue
Til the middle of the night

But at last one morning
Round bout five
As I crawled up out my bed
I heard a shriek of sheer delight coming from the shed

Out the door came a figure clad
In bright red underwear
Riding on a bicycle
Wind blowing through his hair

His eyes were wide
And his mouth agape
As through the dust he rode
Narrowly missing a turkey who was headed for the road

He peddled madly through the dirt
Screamingly as proud and fond
Never looking he was heading
Right for Miller's Pond

With a terrible thump
He hit a rock
And tumbled with a howl
Falling with a mighty thump
And scaring all the fowl

The newly built bike was a twisted mess
And Grandpa was a wreck
Covered in mud and dirty 
With a turkey round his neck

We pulled old Grandpa from the muck
And dragged the twisted frame
But the poor old geezer didn't care
And quietly said "Oh shame"

"I've had my fun - my last hurrah
My birthdays come too fast
Tomorrow I'll be eighty
Much longer I won't last

I got my special wishes
I'm happy just for that
Now, I'm going walking
Please, kids find my hat"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/28/2008 9:56:00 PM
This is a riot! I enjoyed each and every line! Not once did I lose interest, I was intrigued from start to finish! I love humorous poetry. Especially when it tells a story. Great job!! Milt
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Date: 8/28/2008 12:50:00 PM
Valerie, this is such a jovial read, excellent imagery and flow throughout the write, It is so pleasing to see that your Grandpa Leroy got to live his dream. :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 8/28/2008 12:17:00 PM
this was a very warm, tenderhearted and just lovely poem you wrote. oh those grandparents I lost mine over 30 years ago. this pome took me back. thank you for reading my take our snow please and for your comment.
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Date: 8/27/2008 3:04:00 PM
Valerie - What a wonderful tale - Lets see i0 in 33 that would make you 85 right - wow - God Bless
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Date: 8/27/2008 8:10:00 AM
It is so nice to watch your grandpa achieve what he has dreamt and wished for even if he had a bumpy journey...lol...May you always remain close to each other...Sara...
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Date: 8/27/2008 5:18:00 AM
Hi, Valerie, this is a winner with us old folk - I'm 79 - and should be featured. Thanks for reading my stuff. I also like humor, with tongue in cheek. Love, Daver
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Date: 8/26/2008 5:29:00 AM
Such a great story! Love all the details you managed to incorporate into this and the easy flow by which it is read. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 8/25/2008 9:38:00 PM
What a wonderful story, and told so well. Excellent poem. Tango.
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Date: 8/25/2008 4:23:00 PM
This was hilarious....could picture Grandpa every step of the way..building that thing out of scrap, and sitting on it in his long-johns!! What a fun ride you took us on!! 5 stars !! Best wishes..Carrie
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Date: 8/25/2008 4:19:00 PM
Oh Valerie this really was a hoot! Poor Grandpa! Gotta love his determination. So glad he had his moment - even if it was just a moment! : ) Love this well told poetic adventure! Love, Shar
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