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Grandpa's Hands

nurturing fresh roots ardently, Grandpa's wrinkled hands yield God's bounty



Monoku Pick A Picture What Cha See #2
Contest of James Edward Lee Sr
Picture#2    Mar 29, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Vangaveti Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 12:38 AM
Beautifully penned :)
Callus Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 9:03 AM
This is one of the best entries which I've come across, Nette! Those hands were made to work, and they certainly have done a great job. Congratulations. Hugs // paul
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Beautifully penned, nette! I love the contrast between the aged/wrinkled hands and the nurturing of fresh roots ardently. (I think) they call that poetry! Congrats on a well-deserved winner. :) gw
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 6:32 AM
I have read your creative Monoku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Roper Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 1:42 PM
Bad with big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 10:27 PM
A lovely tribute, nette. Congrats on your top win.
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Excellent, Nette. Congrats on the win.
May Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Well expressed Nette...Congrats on your win..
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:43 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful win, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gorelick Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Congrats on your win! BG
Michael Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 11:04 AM
By the sweat of brow and the labor of hands... there's a lot to be said....
Delaney Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:14 AM
Wonderful. A gardener’s hands experienced by years. Great description.
Bangalee Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 1:58 AM
touching heart monoku
Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Your monoku is a winner, Nette. Lovely!
Kannan Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Great one,Nette... Reads like a winner.
Sharp Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 6:41 AM
A very caring and thoughtful piece, Nette, written with great warmth.
One Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 6:05 AM
Great take on the photo Nette..
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Those hands speak through you..grandpa's love!
Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 2:49 PM
Lovely monoku nette, good luck. Tom
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:14 PM
- I chose Picture # 2 too, Nette ... these hands talked to me ... this is a beautiful line about grandfather's hands :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Profound and very beautiful, Nette, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Wanter Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Beautiful line, Nette! Wish I'd had a picture like that one when I wrote Grandpa Was a Carpenter back in 2017.
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