Grandpa's Hand Drill

senryu

grandpa's hand drill
replaced by a battery
male heirloom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 19, 2013 at 5:28 AM
Why, how come, have I not seen your works in Modern Haiku, or the Haiku Society of America's FROGPOND JOURNAL? You have great and grand stuff: You know your poetry genre(s) or every ilk. I should see your name everywhere. GRAND'S HAND DRILL is very nice and the surprise is IT'S GRANDMA. WHAT IS SHE DOING WITH A DRILL LOL. Very nice suprise and the last line shows emotion in the male keeping it as his heirloom. Good stuff. Robert Henry Poulin
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