Grandpa Gave Me a Gift On Christmas Eve

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Twas the night before Christmas and all thru the house
My grandpa's fast at work carving a wooden mouse
In the spirit of St. Nick he bloomed from his heart
And sang holiday cheers and Noel's  from the start

I tiptoed down the steps to his basement and all
Following a trail of music, and grandpa having a ball
I hid from his sight and watched tears run down his eyes
As he carved each toy mouse to its original size

For most of the year, grandpa's an unhappy sport
But save for one night of the year his ship came to port
And there he was a pantomime Silent Night in cadence 
As he stood over his lath and drill, his eyes adance 

Five gift boxes wrapped in gold glitter waited to be filled
Each gifted to his grandkids, who surely will be thrilled 
First, he added a coat of black lacquer, and I did blink
As he dressed each eye, nose, and ear in shades of pink

I may have been five years old on this Christmas Eve past
But watching grandpa come alive, a memory that will last
To have seen his silent night awaken was such a lift
To see him smile with tears in his eyes was a true gift

11/27/22

The Night Before 3 Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/24/2022 6:15:00 AM
A lovely story Connie, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win, Merry Christmas
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/24/2022 4:48:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/23/2022 8:49:00 AM
"To see him smile with tears in his eyes was a true gift" - Wonderful grandpa, indeed! Congratulations!
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/23/2022 2:46:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/23/2022 8:22:00 AM
Connie, this is a beautiful Christmas story. What wonderful memory you have of your Grandpa. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you and may I wish your a very merry Christmas
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/23/2022 2:46:00 PM
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