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Grandpa

I love the book you gave me with birds on the tree, Grandpa can I say something, please listen to me, It is not about the chocolates, but what I want to be, I want to be like a bird, fly up in sky and feel free, Can you buy a pair of wings, I know you will agree. March 30, 2016 Photo#3 Personal Memories-Monorhyme - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2016 10:13:00 AM

Love the moment you've painted, Meenakshi, congratulations on your win!!!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/31/2016 3:14:00 AM

Greetings Meenakshi. Congrats on your top placement with this verse, that cultivates wonder in us!!! ;-)

Meenakshi Raina
Date: 4/1/2016 10:43:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comment!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 3/31/2016 1:36:00 AM

Love the childish heart! Congrats Meenakshi!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/31/2016 12:25:00 AM

Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Meenakshi..

Meenakshi Raina
Date: 4/1/2016 10:41:00 PM

Thank you...

Lu Loo

Date: 3/30/2016 8:51:00 PM

Meenakshi, thank you very much for this beautiful entry, touched my heart. Great Grandpapa passed away a couple weeks ago..many thanks -luloo

Meenakshi Raina
Date: 3/30/2016 11:27:00 PM

Laura, Sorry for your loss .... I dedicate my lines to the Great Grandpapa...take care _ Meenakshi.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2016 2:39:00 PM

aww this is very touching Meenakshi - sadly grandpa in the picture passed away recently and now has his own wings:-( lovely take on the picture good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2016 3:25:00 PM

yes it is very poignant Meenakshi I think Laura is going to be very emotional when she reads the entries for the contest:-( hugs Jan xx

Meenakshi Raina
Date: 3/30/2016 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Jan,... sad to hear that grandpa in the picture passed away...now when I read my lines I find them with a different meaning...

Deepak A.

Date: 3/30/2016 1:49:00 PM

Very nice! Meenakshi

Meenakshi Raina
Date: 3/30/2016 3:23:00 PM

Thank you..