Grandpa

Grandpa

      Telling me always
      about the old world
      trying to make me 
      an understanding girl.


             I love You
   None can ever replace you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 1:50 PM
bet this made him real happy! Luv Ya Debbie Did you write me a Chair Tale, for the contest? What would a chair say who was owned by your Grandpa?
Winter Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 4:21 AM
A special bond. A short but powerful write. Beautiful tribute. Love, Shar
Gass Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 4:39 PM
Just beautiful, Maryam. So full of the love you have for your grandpa. Enjoy every moment with him! Well done! Hope you are feeling better! Love, Robin
Rhinem Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Smile~What a sincere, tender and loved filled write of "Heart & Soul!!!"~"Hello Dear Gifted & Lovely Maryam!!!"~I hope that life is treating You wonderfully today dear!!?~I loved Your write here~filled with soo much beauty and gratitude for Your Grandfather~Smile~I am sure that He was/is a great inspiration~and shall 'Always' be, unto "Your Precious Heart!!!"~"May Your Life Be Blessed With Love & Warmth Always, John!":)
H. Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 6:57 AM
many a grandpa's are our shields, and shelter, great write Maryam, have to add it to my favorites! Love Lots Jen
Dawood Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 12:07 AM
oh, this is so touching, i feel exactly the same way about mine!!! Well done Peace Fathima
Omaidin Avatar
February 20, 2009 at 2:30 PM
Gorgeous poem Maryam, says everything. Regards: Déirdre
Higgins Avatar
February 20, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Very beautiful writing my friend.
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