Grandmother

Grandmother By Saiful Haq: Skinny Skin Bloomed with Wrinkles, Overshadowing her dimples, Staring with Aghast Eyes, Expressing herself in a fatuous Noise. Credulous to lavish promises, Melodramatic to laziness, Pertinacious in her religious beliefs , Punctiliously attending her colleagues. Torpidly trekking with a wooden stick, Very Prone to being sick, Showering her blessings diligently, Is the patriotic head of Our family.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/31/2014 12:43:00 AM

:) Good night

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 2:25:00 PM

Saiful, thank you for the reply

Saiful Haq
Date: 7/29/2014 10:18:00 PM

Your welcome :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/27/2014 6:49:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Saiful. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Saiful Haq
Date: 7/28/2014 7:09:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:02:00 PM

Hi Saiful, WOW, already on the featured list... WOW.. awesome, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Kika Ayala

Date: 7/26/2014 3:50:00 PM

Beautiful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.

Saiful Haq
Date: 7/26/2014 10:54:00 PM

Thank you so much :) Keep reading and best wishes to you too!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/26/2014 2:33:00 PM

Saiful, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Saiful Haq
Date: 7/26/2014 11:07:00 PM

Thank you Linda for such a warm welcome , I will try my best :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2014 11:37:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Saiful :) - I choose your first lovely written "Grandmother" poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Saiful Haq
Date: 7/26/2014 11:10:00 PM

i will be sure to keep up :)