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Grandma's Pond

A small pond, nestled in the ever soft grass! The sun glints off the surface of this peaceful pool! A small waterfall cascades over the rocks, constantly churning the water. The breeze a soft whisper against my face. Small trees of pine, stand off to one side! The gentle gurgle of water ever present, so peaceful and quiet! Absolutely beautiful!

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Jeremy Martin

Date: 5/12/2013 2:00:00 PM

I'm wondering why you chose the exclamation points here. They seem to not quite make sense with the quiet and peaceful theme of the poem, but you evoked a lovely scene. Good work, keep it up. -Jeremy

Dyp The Wolf
Date: 5/12/2013 6:35:00 PM

thank you... and i dont know i just like exclamation points! hahaha! lol! XD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2013 12:50:00 AM

yes, it is so beautiful. Cute avatar too!

Dyp The Wolf
Date: 5/12/2013 11:04:00 AM

thank you and thank you! the avatar is Dyp my fursona! and the poem is about a pond in my grandmas back yard!